Christmas Dinner

We saw that you lay in your bed; an over imbibed Christmas Day. In fact, you had buried your head; you wished we would all go away. We noticed you tossing in bed, not daring to open your eyes; aware that the daylight ahead would come as a nasty surprise. We heard as you rushed from your bed and dashed to the bathroom in flight. You peered at the glass with some dread; the face looking back was a fright. We hoped you would soon leave your bed all blessed with a happy release. But knowing you’d rather be dead, we left you to suffer - in peace. ~
For Francine's Contest - 13th December 2012.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 5:26 PM
Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
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December 24, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Good morning, Charles,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Francine's "Christmas Dinner with Humor" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 4:59 PM
haha, I just read seren saying she has had this feeling. I am thankful I never have, well except when I got food poisoning! Congrats on your win with this unique poem.
Self Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 2:55 PM
Congrats on your poem Charles!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations Charles a superb win xx
Roberts Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 7:47 PM
Lol i have known that feeling ...Seren
Roberts Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 6:31 PM
congrats on your 7th place win , great entry
Collins Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 8:59 AM
Dear Charles - hungover can be close to dead. Love the poem. Kathy
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