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Written, November 29, 2023
For The Contest, “Christmas Alone”
Sponsor, Constance La France

Christmas Alone


He decorated their small tree-
    as done in prior years,
      and finished like he had before;
but, this time- with sad tears.

You see, he did it all alone,
   now gone- since back in May;
      her death, so unexpected then-
took his dear wife away.

Their son and family- too far
    in miles to travel there-
      their busy jobs kept them away-
not that they did not care.

No gifts beneath their old-time tree;
   no dinner now to eat-
      he wishes she could be with him-
his life- now incomplete.

How could this happen- he's alone
   this sacred Christmas Day;
      if just today was shared once more-
before she went away.

Alone on Christmas Day, the tears
   slide down each rugged cheek;
      in a dim room, by candlelight-
he and his musings, speak.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/13/2023 12:13:00 PM
Sandra, thank you so much for entering my Christmas contest, your poem is so emotional and well done, congratulations on your win, Constance
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Date: 11/30/2023 5:25:00 AM
My Dad will not put up a tree and leaves most things just as they were 2 and a half years ago. Hard to be alone in your latter years without a spouse. Enjoyed.
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Date: 11/29/2023 10:20:00 AM
Hello Sandra haight, this could happen. sdo sad. it made me teary eye. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 11/29/2023 9:14:00 AM
Sad yet awesomely beautiful too Sandra… Belle
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Date: 11/29/2023 8:20:00 AM
Quite a sad verse Sandra, sadly for many they'll be celebrating Christmas alone. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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