Christians Like You

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Judy Ball.


Sometimes some people get so caught up in themselves and their own GOODNESS that their tongue gets caught on their eye tooth and they can't see what they are saying. Thus they end of making enemies instead of friends. Some people seem to think they are such GOOD CHRISTIANS that it is their personal responsibility to adjure and correct their brothers and sisters and to convert all those sinners that never come to church. Christians like that send people running FROM the church not TO it. We can't tell others how horrible they are. We can't shame them into going to church. We have to INVITE them to come with us. And if they want to pass it up for now let them. Then invite them again when we are having a church supper or picnic. Make it an INVITATION not an order.

You wrinkle up your nose,
At your neighbor's dirty doorstep,
Peering through the grimy streaks,
Upon his window pane.

Making fun, reminding him,
Lest anyone forget,
The shameless way he's led his life,
His only claim to fame.

You point out each and every fault,
Each source of strife, contention.
No one that you know is safe.
You preach and you adjure.

'Cause saving their immortal souls,
Is your main intention.
You want to help them mend their ways,
To turn from things impure.

You don't mean to cause upset,
Don't mean to cause contention,
When you point out their short comings,
With helpful criticism.

You're only trying to help them,
Because you're a good Christian;
But they only feel your curses,
and your spiteful cynicism

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/11/2021 10:20:00 PM
I agree with Sara. I often pray for people who are so unchristian. Good advice. ~~
Login to Reply
Ball Avatar
Judy Ball
Date: 1/12/2021 1:29:00 AM
Thanks bunches Victor. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/11/2021 5:18:00 PM
Wonderfully said. "they only feel your curses" and yes, you do more harm than good then. Bravo Judy!
Login to Reply
Ball Avatar
Judy Ball
Date: 1/11/2021 5:47:00 PM
Thanks bunches Caren. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/11/2021 4:56:00 PM
Great insight! The Lord tells us to love.
Login to Reply
Ball Avatar
Judy Ball
Date: 1/11/2021 5:10:00 PM
Amen. Thanks bunches my friend. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/11/2021 1:29:00 PM
This is a creative work about faith. I think the most important part of getting someone to come to share our faith is praying for them then in a causal way invite them to come and don't give up keep up the prayer. I prayed for some people for years and I was not the one that got them to change the Holy Spirit did. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Login to Reply
Ball Avatar
Judy Ball
Date: 1/11/2021 5:00:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara. Same here. God Bless, JB
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad