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Christened

.                   Shimmering white shore

                  Anointed by shafts of sun

                        Baptismal waters

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 5, 2010 at 11:39 AM

What an inspiring haiku, and so timely for Easter too! Let me greet you a Happy easter! and congrats for your 1st place win, dear Carrie :) super yay for you!

Gert W. Knop

March 31, 2010 at 4:47 PM

Congrats Carrie on your win!..This is nearly a mixture between Haiiku and Senryu...great! I must add something to my Abandoned Houses: The problem here in Zittau is that after unification many house owner disappeared to the West and now many really nice and old buildings are in ruins, some even from the 18th Century! And some are even in the towns center...Incredibkle for me! Keep your pen flowing and have a Happy Easter!...Gert

Sue Mason

March 31, 2010 at 10:03 AM

Beautiful the way the title works in !!

Emily Hochberg

March 30, 2010 at 1:20 PM

I love this and the almost simplicity of it, just like nature! Beautiful yet simple.

Mitch White

March 30, 2010 at 1:14 PM

Congrats Carrie on your win in this very cool contest

Gerard Keogh Jr.

March 30, 2010 at 12:59 PM

This is the Easter motif subtext and it is a good one. You keep the thought throughout and this is really fine. It is subdued, but unique. Congratulations on all your marvelous poetry as you are one of the best. Regards, Gerard.

John Freeman

March 30, 2010 at 7:56 AM

Congraulations on your win Carrie. A worthy poem for display. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 29, 2010 at 7:08 PM

Congrats.. for number one. lovely piece

Joyce Johnson

March 29, 2010 at 4:37 PM

A lovely haiku and a well deserved win. Congratulations. Thank you for your comments on my poem today. Love, Joyce

Doris Culverhouse

March 29, 2010 at 3:47 PM

congrats on the win!! Good write! number one!!

Faleshia Murphy

March 29, 2010 at 10:25 AM

thank you so much for your comments I didn't even know my poem was being featured this week faleshia

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2010 at 9:10 AM

Like the word used in the second line Anointed..I saw a congrat in the comments so I guess that a contest has been judged and you are a winner...So my congratulations to you for it was deserving of the win..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Gareth James

March 29, 2010 at 8:37 AM

Lovely words Carrie! Me to, it's amazing the diverse thoughts expressed. Love the last line!!!!

David Byrne

March 29, 2010 at 5:05 AM

makes me wonder where John the Baptist is?

Keabetswe Molotsi

March 29, 2010 at 2:14 AM

i'm digging the imagery on this, nice work. interesting point of view. and congrats!

Brian Strand

March 28, 2010 at 11:57 PM

Congrats on your success with ths one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and kind words today.

Andrea Dietrich

March 28, 2010 at 10:36 PM

Oh, so is this the first place I stumbled onto? Wow, it is so deserving! LUv, Andrea

Constance La France

March 28, 2010 at 4:39 PM

This is very beautiful, indeed and congratulations on first place.. now for your assignment for my contest. In Search of the Human Mind, I have chosen the theme of love... for a lovely lady like you... Constance