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Choreographed Feeding

The seagulls rose, dipped and banked In an ageless, timeless seashore dance Caught in a foamy hypnotic trance  Of bubbling pomp and circumstance.  Triangular wings and snow white breasts Skimming rolling, crashing crests A blur of half seen silhouettes Of madcap, graceful pirouettes.   But when they catch the elusive prize With accelerated flaps they rise On a zig zag course for open skies Amid raucous threatening throaty cries.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/26/2014 2:35:00 PM
Joe, this is great. I admire your rhymes..they flow so smoothly. BG
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Date: 4/27/2014 7:10:00 AM
Barbara, Thank you. We are always looking for our rhyme to fit the reason. In this case the subject matter deserves all the credit.

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