Choked Bloom

The girl weeps a bruised and bitter rain,
A childhood choked, a garden grown in pain.
My laughter, brittle glass, it cracks and breaks,
Beneath the weight of unforgiving stakes.

They built a fortress, walls of rigid stone,
And left my heart a barren, windswept zone.
No lover's hand to soothe, no gentle gaze,
Just scornful whispers in a hateful maze.

Each hallway echoes with a judging eye,
A constant feeling that I want to die.
They see a monster where a child should bloom,
And fill my days with ever-present gloom.

The books lie open, pages blurred with tears,
School's a torment, fueling all my fears.
A secret festers, a corrosive blight,
Consuming hope, and plunging me in night.

I paint a smile, a mask of purest white,
To hide the shadows lurking in the light.
But when the moon ascends its lonely throne,
The tears return, and I am all alone.

A burden I believe, a whispered curse,
This aching need to flee, to be dispersed.
The razor sings a siren's tempting call,
A fragile promise to escape it all.

The girl weeps, a final sigh,
A whispered plea to simply die,
My childhood dead, a silent tomb, 
Lost in this endless aching gloom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 8/7/2025 7:14:00 AM
Diamond songs told us " Kioo hakidanganyi mama umejipodoa umepodoka" which means that the milor doesn't lie, how you see yourself it is how you are
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Date: 8/7/2025 7:12:00 AM
Diamond songs told us " Kioo hakidanganyi mama umejipodoa umepodoka" which means that the milor doesn't lie, how you see yourself it is how you are
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Date: 8/3/2025 11:10:00 AM
I hope this isn't how you are feeling right now... that you are writing fiction or this is your past not your present. You've opened a vein to reveal pain and stirred emotions. Great writing! Xo
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Date: 7/8/2025 4:07:00 AM
By the way, what a beautiful name you have..it means ' beauty' x
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Date: 7/8/2025 4:04:00 AM
iv been reading your poems today, they are very poetic, so well written and very sincere. l feel every word you write and may they help in healing you and all those who reads them. Jackie
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