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Choka Me and I Will Choka You

in a forest...bare
we lay warm on living soil
inhale the flesh scented night
exhale...trading breaths
under a manicured moon
nature plays love's binding song



Maurice Yvonne
September 25 2014
Contest: Choka Me 
Sponsor: Dr. Ram Metha

Copyright © Maurice Yvonne | Year Posted 2014

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Nette Onclaud Date: 9/28/2014 2:04:00 AM coming around again to send you my congrats, maurice.. huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/27/2014 9:43:00 PM For sure it deserved a higher placement! Congrats, I loved seeing it again. Login to Reply

Faye Gibson Date: 9/27/2014 2:24:00 PM Congratulations, Maurice. Beautifully done...love the manicured moon. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/27/2014 10:05:00 AM And back wid huge congrats on ur winning awesome write Maurice! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/27/2014 8:52:00 AM I love this one, I am glad it is on the list. It was good to read it again. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Earl Schumacker Date: 9/27/2014 8:21:00 AM Good morning Maurice, Congratulations on your excellent nature choka win. Have a great week end. Earl Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 9/27/2014 8:00:00 AM ...back with congratulations....for a choka chokablock with sensuality. Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 9/27/2014 6:15:00 AM Congrats brother..... You can put the real title now "Me and Jan in Neverland" Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/27/2014 5:50:00 AM Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Maurice Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/25/2014 10:14:00 PM ooh la la under a manicured moon, that is so creative!! I love the romantic ones that are in the tanka and choka form. VERY well crafted. this one should surely merit a good placement! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 8:49:00 PM Cake sounds good right about now Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 7:00:00 PM You gave in to easily..... For, my ballpark's packed with nothing but fun. Thank you for joining. :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 6:48:00 PM BYE Login to Reply Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/25/2014 6:55:00 PM You win. As always, I am not even in your ballpark. I am not worthy. Thank you Linda, this is a memorable tag.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 6:47:00 PM Okay, one more comment for the road. Enjoy Nature, she's a blast :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 6:46:00 PM Oh, my it's been a long time since sat here, spamming a poem... LOL... This is fun, and I can do this all night. But, I think. I tagged this poem, enough times.. :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 6:45:00 PM By, the way this is a sweet poem, I'm wishing you the best. tag moment ever:) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 6:43:00 PM It would be an honor to choka U neck. LOLOLOLOLOL Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 6:41:00 PM No, No, No, Maurice, If you are going to bother one of my poems, do it in style. :) LINDA Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 6:40:00 PM I WISH I COULD HOT WIRE THIS POEM, INSTEAD, I'M GONNA TAG IT...... YEAHHHHHH!!!!!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 6:39:00 PM TAG . Login to Reply

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 6:35:00 PM :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 6:34:00 PM This is the way you do it:)) Login to Reply

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