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Choices soul makes in God's domain, manifests here as divine will, that we love and learn, acquire skill to be joyful in sun and rain, for in this dream, why'd we complain when there are no desires to kill, choices soul makes? Ephemeral is loss and gain. All’s enabled if we be still, for easy then’s ascent uphill. Ego cravings no longer chain, choices soul makes. 15-October-2022 (Rondine) Rousing Rondine Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jeff Kyser HMS, Rhymezone, PS Grammar

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Date: 11/22/2022 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 11/22/2022 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 11/21/2022 7:56:00 PM
"why'd we complain when there are no desires to kill" - Beautiful.
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Date: 11/21/2022 11:41:00 PM
Thank you, Chris
Date: 10/15/2022 12:57:00 AM
Loved this rondine. Our choice must always be justified the Our Holy God.
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Date: 10/15/2022 1:13:00 AM
… as we shift focus from the ephemeral to the eternal, from the external to the internal, from the material to the ethereal

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