Choices

Choices When thinking about the seeds you've sown And knowing your choices were only your own It may be hard to say Though I was given advice from many voices Most things I did were all my own choices "I take claim at the end of the day"

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Laken Smith

Date: 5/12/2017 12:56:00 PM

A great read! I enjoyed this piece. Please continue to write and share my friend. Be blessed

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/12/2017 11:09:00 PM

Thank you and I'm glad you liked it :)

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/12/2017 2:29:00 AM

So true, at the end of the day we have to take ownership of our choices. Great write Lenna.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/12/2017 10:14:00 AM

Thank You Elizabeth :)

Darren White

Date: 5/12/2017 1:56:00 AM

This is a great message, Lenna. And I think it's true too, at the end of the day we all have to take responsibility for our own actions.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/12/2017 10:15:00 AM

Thank You Darren :)

Chris Green

Date: 5/11/2017 4:44:00 PM

Very cool, such a great message in a wonderful rhyming format. And it still flows smoothly, wow. And you are right, it can be very hard to take responsibility at times. Really nice Lenna

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/11/2017 6:14:00 PM

Thank you Chris :) You get it !! It came to me today after listening to a few people just talking about a couple choices in life.