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Choices

Choices

I dreamed of floating in a toxic sea
with lifeless fish and plants surrounding me.

Above the heavens cast down acid rain
to burn my skin as I winced from the pain.

Volcano Island rumbled to my east
until red plumes of lava were released.

‘Twas then I woke and found myself in bed
with overwhelming feelings of deep dread.

Outside my window, robins on the wing
were building nests on this first day of spring.

The willow’s long arms fell to earth like rain
and I was pleased to be awake again.

Then suddenly, a ring from my alarm
as colors fade to gray, day’s lost its charm.

I’m so confused that now I can’t recall
just which world was my “dream state” after all.

I see two worlds, one heaven and one hell;
our choices will determine where we dwell. 


May 13, 2021
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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 8:59 AM
You are dwelling in heaven dear lady. I miss you so. I hope you met up with my son. You were a blessing in my life and I loved this poem. xxoo
Pathak Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 9:42 PM
Solid narrative full of stark realities expressed in lovely poetic lines, I love such poems. Indeed the task of the judges of such poetry contests must be very difficult: how to choose among such gems! Congrats dear poet, Carolyn Devonshire
Mcgee Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:40 PM
Yikes, that was quite the dream. Glad you are awake and took the prize. Congrats.
Wolf Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 8:51 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest with this deeply felt 'rite of dread,' Carolyn Kudos, Gershon
Roper Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 9:11 PM
Rough dream, Carolyn, great imagery and feeling. Congratulations in Janice Canerdy's couplets contest.
Agustin Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 1:32 AM
Thanks for sharing this ... grim reality in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
Pathak Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 10:14 PM
Beautiful imagery on a perennial dilemma, with a philosophical touch, well done for a deserving first place.
Faulkner Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 7:54 PM
I love the shifting perspectives of this, Carolyn, especially like the line 'willows long arms fell to earth like rain' - congratulations on your well deserved win!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 6:26 AM
Wonderful writing.. profound and inspired. So very true. God bless you and sending love, Gina
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 12:19 AM
thought provoking piece Carolyn man has so much to answer for - we have an organisation called 'beach buddies' and other similar groups are setting up in different countries:-) hugs jan xx many congrats on your win xx
Canerdy Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 10:32 PM
A big CONGRATS on your win in my contest, Carolyn. Thanks for entering! Janice
Devonshire Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Wow Carolyn, this poem impresses the importance of our choices and how they determine our future. I believe cleaning up our earth should be the responsibility of every sentient being. A very meaningful message in your words my friend. Brilliantly written! Blessings, Connie
Callus Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 10:12 AM
I believe that dreams can be meant to be a wakeup call, Carolyn. They dwell on experiences, thoughts, worries and choices. Your lovely poem makes us think as we look for the ideal ways forward in life....and what follows after. Hope you are keeping well my friend. Hugs // paul
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Wowww I totally admire this awesome poem to shake our careless rapacious senses before we continue making the planet a hell with our selfish choices. A great environmentalist poem indeed!!! Kudos!!! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Kendrick Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 3:44 PM
Well, we all know what the Bible says about the end times that if one has read the book so we know what will be happening like 1/3 of all the fish in the sea will die, 1/3 of all the forest will die, etc. We just don't know when it will happen. Thanks for visiting my page and your sympathy for our loss. Sara
Laurie Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 4:31 PM
Hello Carolyn ... certainly many of the highs and lows in our lives are from our own choices. A very thoughtful poem Carolyn - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 4:24 PM
I do believe the sponsor of the contest should be very impressed with this entry, Carolyn. It's wonderful to see a new poem of yours up for all to see. Very lovely writing.
Daniel Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Brilliant, Carolyn, you make the dream and the reality come alive with your vivid imagery:)
Leffanta Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 11:44 AM
The intolerant God of the Middle East set a precedent, drowning, burning, etc. anyone and everyone who might disagree an attitude which persists to this day with Hamas believing they can rocket Is-Ra-Ill-ites who will turn the other cheek. Your penultimate verse is one consequence as people struggle for the truth! Aloha! Rico
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 10:53 AM
- Sounds like a nightmare, Carolyn - Luckily you woke up to beautiful birdsong :) - The last couple is powerful and something to "bite into" - A wonderful poem, best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 12:43 AM
Man has managed to destroy this world beginning with the industrial revolution. Now we've made our world a dustbin, chemicals, plastic, dirt. You had a nightmare but if we continue the way we are, it will be disaster. Hugs.
Pandit Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Each couplet a scene that tells a story! Expertly done, Carolyn. Our choices will indeed determine where we dwell. All the best.
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