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fat Easter bunny she ate ALL the choccy eggs distraught toddler sobs! Easter Haiku or Senryu Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo 04~12~17

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Jon Arno

Date: 5/24/2017 8:29:00 PM

Enjoyed this little gem. Thank you for your gift. Hugs, Jon

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 6:28:00 PM

Well said, Jan, congratulations on your win. ~*

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2017 6:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 4/15/2017 6:33:00 PM

We have to watch out for those bad bunnies that make children cry! Loved this one, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2017 6:37:00 PM

I wanted to write bad mummy but hubby said it was cruel lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2017 10:37:00 AM

A cute senryu, Jan, but a naughty bunny! Maybe we can chip in and buy the toddler some more choccy eggs:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 11:37:00 AM

I wanted for mum to be the Easter bunny eating all the kids eggs but hubby said it was cruel lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 4/12/2017 3:45:00 PM

What a funny bunny!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 3:55:00 PM

Hes a norty fat bunny Jean!:-( hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/12/2017 3:36:00 PM

Guess I won't leave him any carrots.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 3:55:00 PM

oh no carrots for the norty bunny:-( hugs jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 4/12/2017 1:16:00 PM

I wondered where they went...scwewy wabbit. :) Cute Jan and fun to read.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 3:11:00 PM

She's a norty wabbit:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/12/2017 8:48:00 AM

Thank you for bringing us this delightful Easter bunny Jan. The toddlers may have sobbed, but I'm still smiling:) Amitiés

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 10:37:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Marie:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo

Date: 4/12/2017 7:52:00 AM

THX. Is this an Easter funny poem entry, Or an Easter bunny entree, Or a Laura Loo Funny Bunny jog to the memory? (Made me smile,so hugs & Chocolates await thee)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 7:55:00 AM

I won a prize recently and it arrived today a box of luxury chocolate eggs - no Easter bunny is getting their paws on those!:-) hugs Jan xx

Phil Capitano

Date: 4/12/2017 7:51:00 AM

That Easter bunny sounds like me, lol, I can be a pig when it comes to chocolate. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 7:56:00 AM

Oh me too Phil and I do try to be good as hubby is now diabetic but some days you HAVE to have chocolate!:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/12/2017 7:48:00 AM

Awesomely cute Haiku! I'll be cooking bunnies for our Easter feast this year ;) xomo!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/12/2017 7:50:00 AM

I wanted to write 'bad Easter Mummy' for the first line but hubby thought it was too cruel lol:-) hugs jan xx