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Chocs Away

fat Easter bunny
she ate ALL the choccy eggs
distraught toddler sobs!

Easter Haiku or Senryu Contest
Sponsored by Laura Loo



04~12~17

chocolateeastersatiresillysenryu

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Jon Arno

May 24, 2017 at 8:29 PM

Enjoyed this little gem. Thank you for your gift. Hugs, Jon

Eve Roper

April 22, 2017 at 6:28 PM

Well said, Jan, congratulations on your win. ~*

Jan Allison

April 22, 2017 at 6:51 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene Gifford

April 15, 2017 at 6:33 PM

We have to watch out for those bad bunnies that make children cry! Loved this one, Jan

Jan Allison

April 15, 2017 at 6:37 PM

I wanted to write bad mummy but hubby said it was cruel lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

April 14, 2017 at 10:37 AM

A cute senryu, Jan, but a naughty bunny! Maybe we can chip in and buy the toddler some more choccy eggs:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

April 14, 2017 at 11:37 AM

I wanted for mum to be the Easter bunny eating all the kids eggs but hubby said it was cruel lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

April 12, 2017 at 3:45 PM

What a funny bunny!

Jan Allison

April 12, 2017 at 3:55 PM

Hes a norty fat bunny Jean!:-( hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

April 12, 2017 at 3:36 PM

Guess I won't leave him any carrots.

Jan Allison

April 12, 2017 at 3:55 PM

oh no carrots for the norty bunny:-( hugs jan xx

Chris Green

April 12, 2017 at 1:16 PM

I wondered where they went...scwewy wabbit. :) Cute Jan and fun to read.

Jan Allison

April 12, 2017 at 3:11 PM

She's a norty wabbit:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Marie Coreggia

April 12, 2017 at 8:48 AM

Thank you for bringing us this delightful Easter bunny Jan. The toddlers may have sobbed, but I'm still smiling:) Amitiés

Jan Allison

April 12, 2017 at 10:37 AM

Thanks Anne-Marie:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo

April 12, 2017 at 7:52 AM

THX. Is this an Easter funny poem entry, Or an Easter bunny entree, Or a Laura Loo Funny Bunny jog to the memory? (Made me smile,so hugs & Chocolates await thee)

Jan Allison

April 12, 2017 at 7:55 AM

I won a prize recently and it arrived today a box of luxury chocolate eggs - no Easter bunny is getting their paws on those!:-) hugs Jan xx