Doris Culverhouse Poet Free verse

Chocolate Milkshake

A fine meal we had this evening
Somehow though it was not fufiling
My mind keeps slipping over to the Dairy Queen
Holding a frozen chocolate milkshake taste sensation

Sensual and creamy with a sweet decadence
Offered in four flavors for the exotic pallet's satisfaction
The calories hold me in pause, will power stand fast
Keys jingle hand on the door knob.....

Choco' lota ecstasy!!
Varoom varoom!!

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Angelica Grier September 7, 2012 at 8:54 AM Such a fun poem!!! I know this all too well. I LOVE chocolate!!!

Andrea Dietrich August 1, 2012 at 5:00 PM the last line of this one is splendid!!

Joann Grisetti July 16, 2012 at 11:54 AM Your catchy title caught me - a real treat. Glad you have shared this.

Robert Pettit July 2, 2012 at 3:53 PM They do make very good ones at Dairy Queen. Good write.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 29, 2012 at 8:10 AM oh am tasting the essence of this smooth choco delight Doris.. so happy to hear from u luv.. we are heading for Ice Cream Heaven down at seashore tonight.. for a big banana split.. that will do me for the week..luv.. it will be 105 in the shade today .. but the water is so cool.. hope u are feeling fine.. your poetry rocks ..

David Nickle Read June 28, 2012 at 9:05 PM Again i'm lovin your words, but every where thats got milkshake is shut where i am.

David Nickle Read June 28, 2012 at 8:59 PM guns might...... be fun with extreme caution, but i'm one hundred percent with you on chocolate milkshake. I owe the smile on my face to words.

Joseph May June 28, 2012 at 8:59 PM I love chocolate milk shakes too...enjoyed your poem Doris...thanks for stopping by...hugs...Joseph

Tim Ryerson June 28, 2012 at 8:51 PM Oh YEAH, Doris! Thank I'm gonna make a quick trip to the fridge right now. Oh I'm gonna make a GLORIOUS mess! Calories, shmalories, who cares? - Tim

Sara Kendrick June 26, 2012 at 7:23 AM We visited the Diary Queen yesterday after your daddy's doctor's office visit..I got a small hot fudge sundae with peanuts...It was quite delightful..Enjoyed reading your passionate write about a great treat..Mom

Poet Destroyer A June 24, 2012 at 3:47 PM Doris, ooo... did you say varoom varoom... lol... now give me some chocolate... thanks for sharing your poem, always~PD

Anne-Lise Andresen June 24, 2012 at 11:27 AM .....Yes....Choco`lota ecstasy !!!!.....love it Doris. - Have a lovey Sunday....varoom....varoom.... - oxox me :)

Lori Lucas Mcclure June 24, 2012 at 7:02 AM Awe.... Chocolate take me away!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome write!

Kim Merryman June 23, 2012 at 7:35 PM Go for it, Doris! I would. I enjoyed your fun write. Love, Kim

Steven Henderson June 23, 2012 at 6:55 PM you brought a smile to my face this evening Doris.. I thank you! Peace and blessings to you.