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Chocolate Milkshake

A fine meal we had this evening Somehow though it was not fufiling My mind keeps slipping over to the Dairy Queen Holding a frozen chocolate milkshake taste sensation Sensual and creamy with a sweet decadence Offered in four flavors for the exotic pallet's satisfaction The calories hold me in pause, will power stand fast Keys jingle hand on the door knob..... Choco' lota ecstasy!! Varoom varoom!!

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Angelica Grier

Date: 9/7/2012 8:54:00 AM

Such a fun poem!!! I know this all too well. I LOVE chocolate!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2012 5:00:00 PM

the last line of this one is splendid!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/16/2012 11:54:00 AM

Your catchy title caught me - a real treat. Glad you have shared this.

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/2/2012 3:53:00 PM

They do make very good ones at Dairy Queen. Good write.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/29/2012 8:10:00 AM

oh am tasting the essence of this smooth choco delight Doris.. so happy to hear from u luv.. we are heading for Ice Cream Heaven down at seashore tonight.. for a big banana split.. that will do me for the week..luv.. it will be 105 in the shade today .. but the water is so cool.. hope u are feeling fine.. your poetry rocks ..

David Nickle Read

Date: 6/28/2012 9:05:00 PM

Again i'm lovin your words, but every where thats got milkshake is shut where i am.

Joseph May

Date: 6/28/2012 8:59:00 PM

I love chocolate milk shakes too...enjoyed your poem Doris...thanks for stopping by...hugs...Joseph

David Nickle Read

Date: 6/28/2012 8:59:00 PM

guns might...... be fun with extreme caution, but i'm one hundred percent with you on chocolate milkshake. I owe the smile on my face to words.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/28/2012 8:51:00 PM

Oh YEAH, Doris! Thank I'm gonna make a quick trip to the fridge right now. Oh I'm gonna make a GLORIOUS mess! Calories, shmalories, who cares? - Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/26/2012 7:23:00 AM

We visited the Diary Queen yesterday after your daddy's doctor's office visit..I got a small hot fudge sundae with peanuts...It was quite delightful..Enjoyed reading your passionate write about a great treat..Mom