Notes About The Poem

Become this character for the next 12 minutes,  and WRITE A THOUGHTSHOT that would let readers know what caused you to react the way you did when the photo was taken.   **Common Core State Standards W3, L6 (character reflection, tone) Lesson link pinterest

- Chocolate -

Cute as an angel
Heavenly - Oh, gosh
One of a kind
Chubby hands, love the hair
Only one little bite
Lovely magical moments
Amazing pleasure
Tasty - but a little sticky
Enchanting chocolate face














17.09.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)

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Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:27 PM
Yes, cute as an angel, a chocolaty one!!
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 12:26 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ricci Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Good Morning Anne - It was the title that caught my eye. You give life and flair to chocolate and to the image you share. Well done with the format as well. Enjoy the weekend.
Andresen Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:14 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comment, Lisa :) - Nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, i just finished reading your poetry. I enjoyed every poem you have written. This poem chocolate and I enjoyed reading this poem. have a nice day my friend.
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:41 AM
- Thank you for your visit & lovely comment, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Such a cute picture accompanying this lovely poem, Anne-Lise. I believe that at his age I had never tasted a chocolate, neither had most of my friends! Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 3:00 PM
- We did not get chocolate as a child ... not my children either - Thanks for the lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marie Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 5:51 PM
Too cute! Just priceless Anne-Lise. thank you for the wonderful smiles xo
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 2:20 AM
- Many thanks Lynn, for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Children and chocolate! What a combination, Anne-Lise. I adore your acrostic as well as the photo. As you say, "Tasty - but a little sticky." Yummmy
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 11:58 AM
- Sticky but very cute, Carolyn :) - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:11 AM
Very sweet..
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:04 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments, S. O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vacek Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 1:54 PM
I read the poem without the picture, then clicked to comment. Seeing the picture, it was a little worse than I thought. Nice write
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:09 AM
- Many thanks Michael, for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 1:48 PM
Reminds me of a little angel with a flute, Sunshine, enjoyed reading ~`*
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:08 AM
- Eve, many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 12:46 PM
First of all i say you i love children much and much more good funny children. They give life surely if one can enjoy with them. i gave a chocolate to a child he did the same thing. My fave piece. Beautifully captured the picture and drawn with sweet ditto words, my lovely dear friend. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:08 AM
- Many thanks for your visit a fave and your lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 7:01 AM
Cuteness personified!! Anne-Lise, you sure know how to put brightness in a person's day. Thank you...Maria
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:07 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:24 AM
Ha ha, that's a cute and naughty boy indeed, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:07 AM
- Many thanks Jo, for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 11:16 PM
By the way how did you find my photo? LOL
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:54 AM
- I found it in your mother's old photo album ... you were so sweet I could not resist, Arthur :) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 11:16 PM
Loved this!!!
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:55 AM
- Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hagy Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 9:42 PM
From one chocolate freak to another...love this one! :) Pix is sooo cute! I'm sure most of us looked like that eating chocolate as kids! Now days I'm more reserved and love the dark stuff :) Thanks for writing and posting this cute piece...have great day and keep the smiles coming Sunshine :)
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:52 AM
- Sticky but very cute, Chris :) - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ashley Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:45 PM
I love the picture. I love the poem. I love chocolate! A great write that made me smile Anne-Lise. Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:49 AM
<3 <3 <3 ... :))) - Thanks for the lovely comments, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 6:16 PM
Ahh!! The love of chocolate brings forth a praise..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:48 AM
- Many thanks Sara, for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcconnell Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 3:39 PM
Great pic and penning too Anne-Lise, well done!
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:47 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 3:26 PM
glad i'm not the one cleaning that child! very cute one, anne-lise!
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:47 AM
- A quick shower ... good as new, Ilene :) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:23 PM
How sweet this is, my dear...extremely sweet. :) Hope all is well, dear.
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 2:35 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 9:18 AM
oh what a wonderful pic and charming poem and who could resist that impish face:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 11:53 AM
- Who can resist chocolate, Jan :) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:45 AM
The poems sounds as happy as the little girl eating chocolate--well depicted as always, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 8:04 AM
- Enchanting chocolate face ... make me smile, Vijay :) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lane Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:43 AM
I'd be willing to bet that's not the first 'little' bite. What an impish face! Well written, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:56 AM
- You know, Lin ... chocolate ... one bit ... and you are "hooked" :))) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:41 AM
Too funny and cute
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 8:02 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sivey Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:20 AM
This is such a perfect poem for that picture you placed here! I really loved reading your stunning poem this morning! Your choice of words were excellent in describing the child's situation! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:57 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments, Russell :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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