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CHOCOLATE doc hildebrandt said “milk chocolate is healthful.” i love chocolate i love CRAVE milk chocolate so i ate a ton of it had chocolate dreams t shirt said hershey pa it’s all that i ate then it came over the news “mad doctor loses license”

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Date: 11/18/2012 5:39:00 PM
Wow...dreaming in that's an obsession. Fun poem!
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Date: 7/24/2012 12:52:00 PM
Clever, funny work. Peace & Blessings Matthew anish
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Date: 7/24/2012 9:10:00 AM
good ole doc hildebrandt. guess he got his license in candyland.
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Date: 7/23/2012 9:36:00 PM
A lovely story poem with a touch of humor. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 7/23/2012 9:27:00 PM
hahaha, a story in your tanka. great fun, Daver. Anyway, DARK chocolate is the way to go!!!
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Date: 7/22/2012 2:38:00 AM
Daver... ha ha! Only you! Only you!!!! your ending cracked me up... oooo! I love me moooooooooing milk mustache... lol.. xox~pd
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Date: 7/21/2012 10:45:00 AM
I love chocolate to......I eat not a ton but eat to much of (only Norwegian)milk chocolate....jummmi jummmmi mmm.... All coocolate will keep the doctor away....(?) - Have a sweet weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/20/2012 8:14:00 PM
If I start I can't stop so I stay away from the stuff and stay slim. The only way to win the battle. How's your waistline?
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Date: 7/20/2012 1:56:00 PM
Ha ha, this is a funny piece here Dave! Such a creative and delightful write! I enjoyed this poem a lot! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/20/2012 12:19:00 PM
Uh oh...I love chocolate too, Daver! They still say it's healthy, but mostly the dark one that tastes like bitter plastic.:) Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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