Chocolate

So yummy and beautifully described. Congrats, Ink

So sweet, Ink, everyone loves chocolate:)

A very tasteful write, Ink. Especially the line- "creamy layers of love" Nicely done, dear friend. Best wishes in the contest. Merry Christmas to you and yours. Hugs Charlie :)

Sex or chocolate. Chocolate or sex. Chocolate or chocolate. Why did she just slam the door? Women!

oh my, ink...I am totally tasty-fied with your delish lines...who can deny caramelized almonds, cocoa milk and the like? Well the holidays are our cheat days as well...superb!

Even adults succumb to the allure of chocolate, my dear Ink; I must admit, my diabetes prevents me from being a huge admirer of the sweet treat, but I can't deny that it entices adults as well. My mouth is watering from reading your description. With your vivid metaphors and impeccable wording, you created poetry that was unmatched in its day.

chocolate for me is like a sin, e very impressive and creative poem, irresistible chocolate, thank you so much poet

Sinfully good. Delightful decadence. What the heck!! -- 'Tis the season to get plumpy. Love it.

Love it, the poem, chocolate... very well written and enchanting

of course you did , I love it !

Candle-lit cravings ooze, caramelized almonds, creamy layers of love… my goodness!!! What is happeneing !!! Am I about to be aroused ?? Papi!!!?? carving midnight spoons in crisp cadence, oooo child yaaazzz!!! Talk dirty to me !!! coated with cocoa milk… mmmmmm that’s it um gonna go get chocolates!!! … velvety clusters of sweet essence. Such sexiness you have bestowed upon my eyes papi… absolutely divine!!

Chocolate is not the weakness of children alone, but something that tempts elders too. But many with sugar levels high, dread it and finally yield to the temptation. Your description has made my mouth water. When we went to Europe, we bought two massive bars of Toblerone and some loose chocolates from Switzerland to be gifted to our sons. But as they didn't come in time, we both ate it bit by bit and now the whole thing is almost over. "Caramelized almonds and creamy layers of love...." crisp cadence quoted with coca milk....What exotic ingredients! So delectable!

Everyone's downfall IE, one piece is not enough, you have to demolish the whole bar lol. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom

- Love it ... can I taste a little bit? - Luck in the contest :) - I wish you a peaceful and lovely Christmas, Ink :) - hugs

And a Big Yes Please from me sweet Ink!! Lovely!.....Debx

My goodness!!! If ever there can be words to describe the divine nature of chocolates, then they can't be more heavenly than your ethereal descriptions!! I'm beyond impressed by your artistic ability to illustrate such a vibrant and caramelised pleiades that can make anyone swoon and crave for chocolates, like I am now, hahhaaa, this is so delicious ~ "candle-lit cravings", "creamy layers of love" wowww!! "craving midnight spoons in crisp cadence" now that's a unique and breathtaking line.."Velvety clusters of sweet essence" That makes me wonder if chocolate chips are lil shiny stars glistening in the midnight skyyyy ahhhh ~ your imagination is absolutely brilliant my dear fairy goddess. This pleiades should do really well in the contest, best of luck! Sending you lots of love and light always, this one's going in my FAVES ~

I’m craving for chocolate now