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Written for Andrea Dietrichs Pleiades contest on Food. As a chocoholic i had to do chocolate

Candle-lit cravings ooze, caramelized almonds, creamy layers of love~ carving midnight spoons in crisp cadence, coated with cocoa milk; velvety clusters of sweet essence.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2024 11:38:00 AM

So yummy and beautifully described. Congrats, Ink

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/18/2024 4:37:00 AM

So sweet, Ink, everyone loves chocolate:)

Charles Messina

Date: 12/17/2024 6:12:00 AM

A very tasteful write, Ink. Especially the line- "creamy layers of love" Nicely done, dear friend. Best wishes in the contest. Merry Christmas to you and yours. Hugs Charlie :)

Ink Empress
Date: 12/17/2024 9:06:00 PM

Its so good to see you today visiting my page! Thank you dear charles. Sending you light always

Paul Bell

Date: 12/17/2024 4:53:00 AM

Sex or chocolate. Chocolate or sex. Chocolate or chocolate. Why did she just slam the door? Women!

Ink Empress
Date: 12/17/2024 9:10:00 PM

Hahah your comments are funny too. Thank you for visiting. Men! Are always confused it seems haha

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/16/2024 7:35:00 PM

oh my, ink...I am totally tasty-fied with your delish lines...who can deny caramelized almonds, cocoa milk and the like? Well the holidays are our cheat days as well...superb!

Ink Empress
Date: 12/17/2024 9:13:00 PM

Thank you so very much dear nette im grateful for your kindness and support

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/16/2024 5:54:00 PM

Even adults succumb to the allure of chocolate, my dear Ink; I must admit, my diabetes prevents me from being a huge admirer of the sweet treat, but I can't deny that it entices adults as well. My mouth is watering from reading your description. With your vivid metaphors and impeccable wording, you created poetry that was unmatched in its day.

Ink Empress
Date: 12/17/2024 9:28:00 PM

Thank you so much for your comment

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/16/2024 3:56:00 PM

chocolate for me is like a sin, e very impressive and creative poem, irresistible chocolate, thank you so much poet

Ink Empress
Date: 12/17/2024 9:30:00 PM

Is like a sin? Awwn haha yes chocolate for me is like my guilty pleasure. Thank you so much for being always supportive

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/15/2024 5:09:00 PM

Sinfully good. Delightful decadence. What the heck!! -- 'Tis the season to get plumpy. Love it.

Ink Empress
Date: 12/17/2024 9:54:00 PM

Hah plumpy yes maybe: thank you so very much dear joe, appreciate your visit

Paige Hind

Date: 12/15/2024 12:21:00 PM

Love it, the poem, chocolate... very well written and enchanting

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/15/2024 11:00:00 AM

of course you did , I love it !

Ink Empress
Date: 12/17/2024 9:54:00 PM

Awwwn thank you

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 12/15/2024 7:46:00 AM

Candle-lit cravings ooze, caramelized almonds, creamy layers of love… my goodness!!! What is happeneing !!! Am I about to be aroused ?? Papi!!!?? carving midnight spoons in crisp cadence, oooo child yaaazzz!!! Talk dirty to me !!! coated with cocoa milk… mmmmmm that’s it um gonna go get chocolates!!! … velvety clusters of sweet essence. Such sexiness you have bestowed upon my eyes papi… absolutely divine!!

Ink Empress
Date: 12/15/2024 11:00:00 AM

Oh my god! You are insane papi hahah seriously

Jacqueline Elston

Date: 12/15/2024 7:09:00 AM

ohh you have reminded me l have a box of cherry brandy chocolates in fridge, my once a year treat as so expensive. l will eat them watching 'Cholat' movie tonight. Good luck in contest ,you have such a lovely way to express words poetically J..

Tom Woody
Date: 12/15/2024 12:49:00 PM

We love the movie Chocolat

Ink Empress
Date: 12/15/2024 11:02:00 AM

Awwn i hope you enjoy your chocolate , and thank you so much for such a beautiful comment, and for being so supportive im grateful for your visit dear JE

Tom Woody

Date: 12/15/2024 5:57:00 AM

My wife and I have this weird after dinner ritual: Two dark chocolate salted caramels for me and 4 dark chocolate covered almonds for her. We're addicted lol. Your poem is delectable

Tom Woody
Date: 12/15/2024 12:48:00 PM

Never had Korean chocolate

Ink Empress
Date: 12/15/2024 11:15:00 AM

Yes we are too, im a chocoholic, i fight cravings everyday. Its so nice that you have chocolates with wify after dinner. Do they also have korean chocolate? I would like to try: my fave is swiss and swedish

Valsa George

Date: 12/15/2024 5:19:00 AM

Chocolate is not the weakness of children alone, but something that tempts elders too. But many with sugar levels high, dread it and finally yield to the temptation. Your description has made my mouth water. When we went to Europe, we bought two massive bars of Toblerone and some loose chocolates from Switzerland to be gifted to our sons. But as they didn't come in time, we both ate it bit by bit and now the whole thing is almost over. "Caramelized almonds and creamy layers of love...." crisp cadence quoted with coca milk....What exotic ingredients! So delectable!

Ink Empress
Date: 12/15/2024 11:30:00 AM

Have you seen the cailler factory in switzerland that is my fave chocolate. And its so good. Awwn now i feel like having some chocolate and yes i try too to not eat too much but i cant help it; thank you for sharing this dear sweet valsa and also for your kind comments on so many of my poems . I am truly grateful. Will visit your page too shortly. Sending you light always

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/15/2024 3:34:00 AM

Everyone's downfall IE, one piece is not enough, you have to demolish the whole bar lol. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/15/2024 3:17:00 AM

- Love it ... can I taste a little bit? - Luck in the contest :) - I wish you a peaceful and lovely Christmas, Ink :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 12/15/2024 1:11:00 AM

And a Big Yes Please from me sweet Ink!! Lovely!.....Debx

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/15/2024 12:10:00 AM

My goodness!!! If ever there can be words to describe the divine nature of chocolates, then they can't be more heavenly than your ethereal descriptions!! I'm beyond impressed by your artistic ability to illustrate such a vibrant and caramelised pleiades that can make anyone swoon and crave for chocolates, like I am now, hahhaaa, this is so delicious ~ "candle-lit cravings", "creamy layers of love" wowww!! "craving midnight spoons in crisp cadence" now that's a unique and breathtaking line.."Velvety clusters of sweet essence" That makes me wonder if chocolate chips are lil shiny stars glistening in the midnight skyyyy ahhhh ~ your imagination is absolutely brilliant my dear fairy goddess. This pleiades should do really well in the contest, best of luck! Sending you lots of love and light always, this one's going in my FAVES ~

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 12/15/2024 12:00:00 AM

I’m craving for chocolate now