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Chimerical

A walk solitary in the evening, took me to a path that led to the vast calm sea under the serene blue sky; In the midway, I stopped to reach a spot so calm and placid, with verdant plains of pristine blooms, in green rusticity of bucolic charm, when whispers of my soul echoed and merged into that stillness: stillness of an enchanting moment, of a delightful warm evening. Feeling the throb of silence, I pondered on the musings of my soul, lost in thought on the fragility of life; In a trancelike state that followed, I saw the golden sun setting over the primordial sea and felt my eyes strained to catch a glimpse of a cherubic shadowy image, emerging and floating in the distant faint hazy sky. An ephemeral moment shrouded in obscurity... Is it real or imaginary? Mouth agape, I saw a dainty form like that of an ethereal divine spirit: so delicate, graceful, gossamer-fragile; the angelic figure opened her mouth, as if to say something to me, in a low faint voice. Anxiety overtook my poise, in that dreamlike illusory moment Ah so oneiric; as I glared at the wispy shape, at that mystical instant that seemed to be surreal, I heard tunes mellifluous, and chiming of soft bells; swirling hues of blue, purple and golden yellow, and sparkles of light charmed my eyes - all so chimeric and unreal. Then, the starry-eyed heavenly angel spoke to me in her soothing soft voice: "The soul of Nature is bleeding Never let Her perish... " An evening chorus of pigeons now roused me from my reverie. I stood there in astonishment, reflecting on all that happened A while ago... The angel had disappeared... Now, the sun was about to set, and I was standing at the same spot as before... With the message of the angel still echoing in my mind... Date: 05/28/2021 Submitted for: Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 6/2/2021 3:25:00 PM
Ani, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, love _Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:13:00 PM
Expressing my Congratulations, Again. Waiting to read more.
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations! A very beautiful poem filled with profound thoughts. Such a lovely story you created! Love and warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 5/30/2021 1:43:00 PM
Related to dreams is what I see for that word.
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Date: 5/30/2021 1:42:00 PM
wow, you went to a very ethereal place with this one, my friend. And you used lots of really interesting words. I still do not know the meaning of oneiric. I need to look it up! GREAT writing with lovely imagery and flow, sweetie.
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Date: 5/30/2021 12:22:00 AM
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL WRITE MY DEAR FRIEND - YOUR POETRY BLOSSOMS MORE WITH EVERY POEM YOU POST, IF THAT IS POSSIBLE - I LOVE THE CELESTIAL PRESENCE OF THE ANGEL VISITING YOU AND WHISPERING A MESSAGE JUST FOR YOU. AN AWESOME WRITE. BLESSINGS AND HUGS JENNIFER.
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Date: 5/29/2021 8:43:00 PM
A soft flowing poem oozing with rich imagery! So lovely! Best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 5/29/2021 3:09:00 PM
wow, this is what I call one beautiful dream that makes one long, never to wake up from. gl in the contest dear Anitha , xo
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Date: 5/29/2021 1:50:00 PM
Good work. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/29/2021 6:02:00 AM
Loved the imagery you so beautifully design in your poetry, Anitha:) learnt a new word - oneiric:)
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Date: 5/29/2021 4:59:00 AM
Enjoyed the scenes you depicted in this superb free verse that has a unique rhythm. A magical universe of imagination--dreamlike indeed!
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Date: 5/29/2021 3:23:00 AM
Magnificent, lovely Anitha! your great imagery and wonderful wording are incredible. These are probably my favorite lines: Feeling the throb of silence, I pondered on the musings of my soul, lost in thought on the fragility of life; In a trance-like state that followed. Blessings and a lovely day Anitha
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Date: 5/29/2021 2:37:00 AM
Outstanding poetic melody inspired by the divine! Heavenly message, superb writing, my dearest friend Anitha! Blessings!
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Date: 5/29/2021 1:05:00 AM
Loved your poem Ani. A well articulated poem, full of imagery and emotions. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/28/2021 9:45:00 PM
This is a sublime piece dear Anitha! Oozing with rich imagery and vivid colours! I love most the line, "whispers of my soul echoed and merged into that stillness". This is a fave for me! Best luck in the contest!
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