Chilling On the Coast

Life is pleasant on the Atlantic coast
Fishing is surely what I enjoy most
     Songs of gulls surrounding me
     Colorful shells line the sea
And of my exploits I feel I must boast

The breeze is refreshing as winds pick up
I cast out hoping for something to sup
     Though the tides aren’t moving
     I am always still grooving
Then with a smile I spy a fish close up

It’s just a tiny minnow swimming past
Oh yes, he’s small, but he might be the last
     So I reach down with my net
     He splashes and gets me wet
On a summer day I have chilled out fast



*Entry for Yasmin’s “Letting Your Hair Down” contest by Carolyn Devonshire.  Written 6/19/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 11:32 AM
carolyn congrats on your win, I would love to go fishing with you....David
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June 27, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Glad to see you are still entering and winning. I hope you are not getting wet. I heard Dand Anne's town is in the midst of the flooding. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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June 27, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carolyn. Love, Carol
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June 27, 2012 at 9:02 AM
I just happened to mention you to my friend Sharon Weimer. She said she had been fishing on Sunday, and it made me think of you, and your love of the ocean. What a wonderful way to relax and enjoy nature!! Hope you are doing better, Carolyn!!
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June 27, 2012 at 8:05 AM
congrats Caarolyn on a super win for a top notch write.. hoping u are feeling better .. our prayers are continually with u luv..
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June 27, 2012 at 1:27 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Carolyn xx
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June 19, 2012 at 7:37 PM
This is a perfect way to relax and chill! I have my couch and my poetry to relax, but I do have to say I like your method too! Awesome poem my friend, awesome poem! Good luck in the contest! Great Work Carolyn!!
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