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My parents called them love birds and loved to watch them raise their young..Sara
Once again out to the chilled air For my ten minutes rest Coming out the door a prayer From my lips a request To the porch so many times Before, but now Bue Bird Flew across the yard climbs High, as the cold air stirred Beneath his lovely strong blue wings. Then I spied the reason For his flight's fast and upward swing. Bird house gone; last season It fell from its place in the shade. It had been placed there long Ago, parents watched as birds played And listened to their song. My prayer request has rested. New prayer now on lips Let me find way uncontested House that Blue Birds worships. In honor of Brian Strand Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/9/2012 8:36:00 AM
Hello....how are you? did Caleb tell you ashley attacked henrietta now she is under the pine tree....
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Date: 2/9/2012 8:26:00 AM
Very lovely piece...
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Date: 2/8/2012 2:39:00 PM
blue birds are my favorite bird. They are told to be the bird of friendship. enjoyed reading your poem today very, very much, With Love, Cindy
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Date: 2/8/2012 1:29:00 PM
What a lovely piece, Sara
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Date: 2/8/2012 11:18:00 AM
Very, very nice......George
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:56:00 AM
what a languid display of thoughts and emotions, sara.. this one glides like birds, so effortlessly!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:04:00 PM
I like that title for this piece: Chilled Air. The poor blue bird! I always enjoy your "slice of life" poems, SAra. I would sure feel bad if this happened to MY bird house(I don't have a bird house but if I did,I'd love to watch the visitors!!)
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Date: 2/6/2012 7:54:00 PM
Lovely Sara, the little beauties are starting to populate ourt area again. Your poem is lovely!
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Date: 2/6/2012 3:40:00 PM
It is a lovely start Sara , Hugs Declan xx
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Date: 2/6/2012 3:22:00 PM
nice soothing start! Light & Love
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Date: 2/6/2012 2:41:00 PM
Wow, very good rhyming poem my friend! You creatively penned together a rhyming masterpiece. It's tough rhyming like you have, so it's great that you have done so effortlessly! I love your poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/6/2012 2:16:00 PM
I can say the same thing as James and Anne Lise below. You have the makings of a good poem here. Keep going, you are headed in the right direction.
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Date: 2/6/2012 1:03:00 PM
So far, so good...I see a wonderful write here dear poet ! Have a great week my friend.....much love, james
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Date: 2/6/2012 12:50:00 PM
Very good so far Sara -oxox love Anne-Lise
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