Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Chill Spring

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  i don’t know    the words
the bird sings
   they land   gently
on my ears
           paired up
with the wind chime

           circulation
  wide open    doors -
full-out chill Spring

5/7/2022

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Paige Hind August 16, 2024 at 6:36 PM How different! I love your take on birds singing! <3 Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2024 at 7:02 PM Do happy you enjoy! I love birds singing in the morning. <3

Caren Krutsinger May 13, 2022 at 11:03 PM " i don’t know the words" - oh, Kim, I think that you do! Kim Rodrigues May 14, 2022 at 6:49 PM Let’s sing them together! You’re my forever friend! You make my day!

Valsa George May 10, 2022 at 9:50 PM Bird song mixed with wind chime.....This is lovely ! Kim Rodrigues May 11, 2022 at 3:44 PM Thank you, Valsa!

Sara Kendrick May 10, 2022 at 1:44 PM Yes, it is good to chill out in spring. I enjoyed reading your work. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Kim Rodrigues May 11, 2022 at 3:45 PM Thank you, Sara!

Bill Baker May 9, 2022 at 5:08 PM I like the feel of open doors or screen doors and the sounds of birds singing. I can feel the country and blessings of nature around me. Bless you and your poetry, Kim. Kim Rodrigues May 11, 2022 at 3:47 PM God wonderfully fills our lives with sweet things :)

Victor Buhagiar May 8, 2022 at 1:31 AM Do birds sing when its chilly? Probably they are in search of some comfortable place. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues May 8, 2022 at 5:46 AM That could be!

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2022 at 8:18 PM very cool spring poem. CHILL!! Kim Rodrigues May 8, 2022 at 5:47 AM :) Thank you, Andrea!