Chill, Baby

. I wake & reach out to you .................... you are my all ......................... I love you, but not for your looks - I love you for all that is within ........................................ where would I be without my fridge ? .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Fiery Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 7:45 AM
The last word was full of surprise..I liked the flow of this piece...I should check your other works too...7/7..cheers !!
Stebbings Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 6:58 AM
Beautiful, love the layout and ending. Barry.
Lindsay Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 10:42 AM
thanks, Brian ... this has become my style now. ;)
Mcclain Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Hi Bill, Hah! Awesome. Kept it enigmatic until the very last word--very clever. Cheers, Brian
Lindsay Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 7:00 AM
thanks, Brian ... this has become my style now. ;)
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