Chill

chill still in the air april sun piercing thru clouds tickling dormant dreams AP: 1st place 2020 Posted on March 29, 2019

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Date: 4/2/2019 1:47:00 PM

Hello Lin, there is a chill here as well. It snowed and now is melting. Mother nature can not make up her mind. have a nice day my friend.

Date: 3/30/2019 9:42:00 AM

That last line made me smile, as it is so unexpected, but terrific!

Date: 3/29/2019 11:48:00 PM

Perfect little haiku, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2019 11:48:00 PM

Thank you, Carole. Most appreciated.

Date: 3/29/2019 11:12:00 PM

Excellent haiku, love it!! ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2019 11:13:00 PM

Thank you, Rhona. Most appreciated.

Date: 3/29/2019 6:13:00 PM

wow.....what a visual....if I listen i think I can hear them giggling

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2019 7:57:00 PM

Thank you so much, John, for your most appreciated visit and delightful comment.

Date: 3/29/2019 4:45:00 PM

This haiku certainly tickled me Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2019 5:00:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Jean.