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Chill, Baby

. I wake & reach out to you .................... you are my all ......................... I love you, but not for your looks - I love you for all that is within ........................................ where would I be without my fridge ? .

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Date: 3/20/2016 7:45:00 AM
The last word was full of surprise..I liked the flow of this piece...I should check your other works too...7/7..cheers !!
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Date: 3/20/2016 6:58:00 AM
Beautiful, love the layout and ending. Barry.
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 3/20/2016 10:42:00 AM
thanks, Brian ... this has become my style now. ;)
Date: 3/19/2016 10:31:00 PM
Hi Bill, Hah! Awesome. Kept it enigmatic until the very last word--very clever. Cheers, Brian
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 3/20/2016 7:00:00 AM
thanks, Brian ... this has become my style now. ;)

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