Children, I'Ve Lost Your Father

Mother called her children 'round
and said I really hate to bother
but I have some rather sorry news,
I think I've lost your father.

He was in the garage a month ago
and the attic sometime before.
He could be in the basement now
but I really can't be sure.

It seems I've lost all track of him
and I haven't got a clue,
I need you kids to search him out,
won't you help me see this through.

Now I'm the eldest of her brood
and I felt some obligation,
so it seemed only right of me
to head up the investigation.

We were somewhat mystified
because dear old dad was dead,
so I had to ask the question
that was on everybody’s head.

Now dad had been cremated
after we held the wake,
some of him was buried
and the rest went to the lake.

So I looked at mom and softly said,
Are you sure you're not mistaken?
Because to the lake and to the grave
is where his remains were taken.

She said that wasn't completely true
and it turned quiet as a mouse.
She'd kept back an extra bit
so he could be around the house.

She never really liked the lake
and graveyards were unappealing
so she could visit him at home
if she ever got the feeling.

With all that said we got to work,
we searched both high and low.
The urn we sought was never found
but that's just the way it goes.

Day by day the years went by
and it was mother's time for dying.
She asked us to keep looking
and to never give up trying.

It wasn't too long after that
as I was clearing out some books
that I found the ashes she had sought
in a place where no one looked.

We took them both to their garden,
mixed with roses, most appealing.
Now she gets to visit him
whenever she gets the feeling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Enjoyed rereading.
Summers Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Thanks so much, it’s actually about my in-laws. John
Gauthier Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 8:10 PM
Such a sweet and loving tone ~ absolutely delightful. A FAVE for me
Summers Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 9:30 PM
I'm so glad you liked it Line. Thank you.
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:40 PM
Aw! This is such a sweet one. Mom had kept some of Dad's ashes so she could still be near him. Now they are still together. A lovely and sweet piece my friend. God Bless and Happy New Year. JB
Summers Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 12:57 PM
Thank you Judy. Happy New Year.
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 12:52 PM
wow, this was SO interesting. The most entertaining poem I read all day so far (though the topic is a bit sad, you sure made some fun of it)
Summers Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 12:56 PM
Thank you Andrea, so glad you liked it.
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Wonderful verse, J. I have a daughter in-law that she never gave up the ashes of her father , she keeps him close, and he died so many years ago.
Summers Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 12:55 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Eve. You can get jewelry pieces made from ashes, not really my taste but I can see it being a big comfort.
Levasseur Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 1:54 PM
What a nicely written saga! Did this really happen? If so, I am glad they got back together.
Summers Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 8:46 PM
Thanks for reading Rob. Yes, more or less that's it. Although the ashes were found in one of her purses and they were my in-laws.
Hamill Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Hi.what a great poem.loved it,they can be together whenever. Take care.simon.:)
Summers Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Thanks Simon, have a good one.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 2:29 PM
This is delightful. You have skills, I like your style. Bravo!
Summers Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:26 PM
So very kind of you to say, thanks for reading and commenting.
Wolf Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 3:32 PM
Ha, ha! This is great. I couldn't wait to find out where that little bit of dad could be. Great write, 'J.' Peace, Gershon
Summers Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:27 PM
All's well that ends well. Thanks Gershon.
Ashley Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 6:17 PM
J., my heart's imagination was captivated by your brilliant poem.. Your gifted pen spills with rhythm, rhyme and tender emotions with beautiful ease. I especially loved your last stanza that reaches the depths of my heart and stays in a sweet bittersweet linger. Exquisite! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Summers Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:03 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Susan. So glad you liked it.
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