Joanna Daniel Poet Cinquain

Children

Childhood
Pure innocence
Laughter in abundance
Friendship, fun, frolicking freedom
Trusting

Children 
Lord's heritage
Quiverful of arrows
Daring, dreaming darlings delight
Blessing


14th April 2023

Syllables: 2.4.6.8.2

For Sotto Poet's "Traditional Cinquain" contest

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Sam Kauffman May 1, 2023 at 11:13 AM Childhood is indeed all of those qualities especially a blessing! I pray it is a blessing for all children. Somehow children have the ability to find dreams everywhere. Thank you for these beautiful verses. Grace and peace to you!

Sara Kendrick April 30, 2023 at 4:46 AM Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler April 29, 2023 at 11:07 AM Back with congratulations on your win Jo! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2023 at 11:52 AM - Lovely - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jo :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2023 at 8:14 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Children" is a lovely write. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris April 28, 2023 at 4:48 AM So nice one. Congratulations on your great win in the Contest...Joanna. Well done this Cinquain

Valsa George April 27, 2023 at 7:27 PM Children are bundles of joy. Beautiful cinquain. Congratulations dear Joanna on your first place win.

Sotto Poet April 27, 2023 at 6:11 PM Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem in my Poetry Contest.  Congratulations on your win

Linda Alice Fowler April 25, 2023 at 6:32 AM A sweet tribute to life and youth Jo. :)

Janice Canerdy April 16, 2023 at 5:47 AM Such a vividly descriptive, well-composed appealing piece, Joanna! Janice

Bill Baker April 15, 2023 at 4:20 PM In their innocence, children are such a joy to see and experience. Good entry for the contest, Joanna. Good luck! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2023 at 10:37 AM These are both awesome

Linda Alice Fowler April 15, 2023 at 7:38 AM Sweet! Love the alliteration. :)

Alexis Y. April 14, 2023 at 5:25 PM Hi Joanna, You really captured the “ innocence “ of childhood in this form. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend;-) Alexis