Children

Childhood Pure innocence Laughter in abundance Friendship, fun, frolicking freedom Trusting Children Lord's heritage Quiverful of arrows Daring, dreaming darlings delight Blessing 14th April 2023 Syllables: 2.4.6.8.2 For Sotto Poet's "Traditional Cinquain" contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/1/2023 11:13:00 AM

Childhood is indeed all of those qualities especially a blessing! I pray it is a blessing for all children. Somehow children have the ability to find dreams everywhere. Thank you for these beautiful verses. Grace and peace to you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2023 4:46:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/29/2023 11:07:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win Jo! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2023 11:52:00 AM

- Lovely - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jo :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2023 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Children" is a lovely write. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/28/2023 4:48:00 AM

So nice one. Congratulations on your great win in the Contest...Joanna. Well done this Cinquain

Valsa George

Date: 4/27/2023 7:27:00 PM

Children are bundles of joy. Beautiful cinquain. Congratulations dear Joanna on your first place win.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/27/2023 6:11:00 PM

Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem in my Poetry Contest. Congratulations on your win

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/25/2023 6:32:00 AM

A sweet tribute to life and youth Jo. :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/16/2023 5:47:00 AM

Such a vividly descriptive, well-composed appealing piece, Joanna! Janice

Bill Baker

Date: 4/15/2023 4:20:00 PM

In their innocence, children are such a joy to see and experience. Good entry for the contest, Joanna. Good luck! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2023 10:37:00 AM

These are both awesome

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/15/2023 7:38:00 AM

Sweet! Love the alliteration. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/14/2023 5:25:00 PM

Hi Joanna, You really captured the “ innocence “ of childhood in this form. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend;-) Alexis