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1. To the clear bidding for one, a mug wump it stands showcasing mouthwatering care but with dirty hands for trophy, for lust, all in a virulent game changing faces and smiles and treating them the same so surrounded by females, happy but flurried after each kiss is a mark to keep her worried their bank of love suffering the imminent theft loving with right, searching for the next with left switching loyalty to skirts is automatic a crime against womanhood and numismatics. Chorus An attractive man, a different boy a lad growing on the tears of women so fearless and brave but cunny and cheap when his arrogance chase the butterflies he’s still blessed with the wasps who come around. 2. Attraction on the snow which later becomes slush same tactics and same theatrics crush after crush forces out a labour of love to keep it pure he isn’t ready to change, that’s one thing for sure every girl is a man changer but he’s a wimp from afar he’s a big guy from close range an imp hope, standing on deputation to many hearts gathering the many dumps and rolling the carts hence he’s not a part of their panegyric and their slow songs of him full of painful lyrics. Chorus An attractive man, a different boy a lad growing on the tears of women so fearless and brave but cunny and cheap when his arrogance chase the butterflies he’s still blessed with the wasps who come around. 3. More victims still counting, his mind is a vagrant fuels emotional injustice to stay vibrant thirsty tenders, he has turned to tempestuous beasts his prey may seem so low but he remains the least tearing the feather boa to expose some shoulders the old not in exception, his ego builders broken taste of modern pride becomes effectual such unpleasant immigration is perpetual just to love for once becomes labour intensive honesty from his mall, stays very expensive. Chorus An attractive man, a different boy a lad growing on the tears of women so fearless and brave but cunny and cheap when his arrogance chase the butterflies he’s still blessed with the wasps who come around. 4. To helpless emotions, he is a basilisk any mast turned towards him is taking a risk the big body aura, hides the scalawag heart on the feminine innocents, he plays the dart when his shadow passes on the streets, sores are seen leaving them dry and brown after meeting them green its same accusation in a hundred lawsuits runs around with targets but nothing in pursuit to be a man is the only recognizance building a resume on ladies’ repugnance. Chorus x 2 An attractive man, a different boy a lad growing on the tears of women so fearless and brave but cunny and cheap when his arrogance chase the butterflies he’s still blessed with the wasps who come around.

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Date: 7/20/2017 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful, complex, textured words paints a picture of life. Deep and compelling! I love it Funom :)
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Date: 7/19/2017 7:34:00 PM
Lovely verse, Great pen my friend Your works are deep, yet wonderful sweet. Marvelous are your works, don't ever stop I enjoyed this blessing my brother James
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Date: 7/13/2017 2:59:00 PM
Another great poem, Funom. You are a remarkably gifted poet. Love your work, my friend. Cool and creative lines throughout ... attraction on the snow which later becomes slush ... same tactics and same theatrics crush after crush. Your pen dips golden ink. Love and joy always.
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Date: 7/5/2017 12:25:00 AM
A great write Funom, you really do craft a good lyric...Maria
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/12/2017 7:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria
Date: 7/4/2017 10:23:00 PM
those snake charmers deceive because of low self-esteem, funom... i like the form and expressive lines you crafted... lovely piece!..huggs
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Date: 7/12/2017 7:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Nette Onclaud. Its always a pleasure reading your encouragements.
Date: 7/4/2017 9:41:00 AM
Well penned, Funom. Those scumbags are the ones who give us all a black eye. I've known some players in the past. I try to keep my distance:) Nice write!!!
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Date: 7/12/2017 6:59:00 AM
Yes Daniel. You are absolutely right. Thank you so much
Date: 7/4/2017 9:31:00 AM
I've known many men like this Funom (and a few women). They are very self centered and their motives totally self serving. A well written lyric.
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Date: 7/12/2017 6:58:00 AM
Thank you so much James Inman

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