Childhood Nostalgia

no recollection
of ebullient memories
life of complex work
too many siblings to please
time for ice-cream if afford

a time of prayer
afterwards back to play cloths
with sweetbread and friends
a time children seen not heard
not enough love to go round

8/6/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/31/2022 3:23:00 PM
Hi Eve. And so it was on the farm but we all knew we were loved and treasured. No ice cream unless we made it ourselves. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 8/31/2022 12:27:00 PM
Childhood indeed has its downs as well as its ups! So well penned my friend! Congratulations on your win. Sending many blessings your way dear Eve.
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Date: 8/31/2022 8:39:00 AM
congrats , nicely penned imagery
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Date: 8/31/2022 6:06:00 AM
"ebullient memories" - Wow! Great! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/31/2022 5:55:00 AM
Never enough love to go around; an excellent Tanka Eve.
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Date: 8/19/2022 5:35:00 PM
Life is different for each child. Some have healthier experiences than others. This was sad to me, it tugged on my heart. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 8/16/2022 7:12:00 PM
'Children seen, not hear' about sums it up for those times... Now on the internet, nobody's seen, everybody's heard. Go figure...
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Date: 8/15/2022 3:52:00 AM
Sometimes life is not easy, and childhood can be difficult at its best. I hope this was about a family you knew and not your own. If it is your own, I hope that you got in adulthood some of what you missed in your childhood. I appreciate your visit to my blog. I have done some updates. SK
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Date: 8/12/2022 11:59:00 PM
Can be related! Sometimes I just wish I could go back in time and stay young forever with little to worry about. A great write! Have a great day!:)
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Date: 8/6/2022 11:49:00 AM
The fact that I used to go swimming a lot helps. Today I feel dry but dreams remain. Hugs.
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Date: 8/6/2022 9:00:00 AM
Ah, sounds so familiar, Eve. I suspect we are close to the same generation...same experiences! Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/6/2022 8:33:00 AM
Reminiscent of another time when “children were seen and not heard”, I know it well. :)Paulette
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Date: 8/6/2022 7:31:00 AM
Your opening is so poignant, Eve, it tugs the heart. And so does the ending line. Sometimes life is so! Emotions well conveyed.
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