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poem written based upon this image--an online poetry class assignment

CHILDHOOD FLICKERS

childhood flickers rise
like small fireflies
caught in the mind’s branches~
quick glints of once-was,
the kind that vanish
even as they shine:

a swing’s slow shadow,
bicycles humming the length of summer,
chalk-bright hopscotch squares
tilted on warm pavement,
the blue hush of a swimming pool
holding our breath and our shadows,
hide-n-seek dissolving into laughter
behind hedges and half-forgotten corners~

all of it quivering
at the edge of recall,
yet steady enough
to warm the present.
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George Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 8:45 PM
"all of it quivering at the edge of recall, yet steady enough to warm the present." Yes, those sweet memories flicker on mind's screen. Though they quiver, they are enough to warm our present. Another gem.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 5:20 PM
When we are old, memories are new, making our lives young again, and the present time is refreshed again, with the past.
George Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 8:59 AM
"Quivering at the edge of recall, but steady enough to warm the present.".. ! So true. This is exactly how l feel when l make a journey into my childhood days. Beautiful poem dear Sara.👍
Loving Iii Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 7:40 PM
You forgot to mention the fun with cousins and friends. but it was worth reading.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:06 PM
So beautifully written, Dear Sara. Childhood memories are always my favourite topic “quivering/at the edge of recall” - and we all had such a wonderful time - just like the poem.
Sands Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 8:32 AM
Clear childhood memories. Well done :)
Parker Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 10:38 AM
The same childhood I lived, not so sure children today play with such innocence...your poem brought back memories
Rolland Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 3:21 PM
beautifully written, enjoyed both music of words, and message, thanks poet Sara
Terry Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 12:18 AM
Childhood memories live with us always. I love the imagery here.
Kendrick Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 4:44 PM
Ahh!! This one reads like a fun childhood in a city or close suburban area. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. Sara K.
DiMino Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 1:54 PM
Hi Sara; very nicely done. Love your little firefly memories stored. I know you are fond of squirrels. I was looking at a novel I wrote, written with animation in mind. Almost forgotten. Squirrels are the main protagonists and heroes. You may enjoy the read: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/299623/chapters/3
Kauffman Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 11:39 AM
Sara, your words and wonderfully creative images instantly evoke treasured memories of childhood that seem to abide in an almost sacred space. Love this one! Hope you got an A+! Blessings and hugs, my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 5:30 PM
A very inspiring prompt it was for you. Beautiful
Buhagiar Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 1:56 AM
A poem that describes a golden ache of nostalgia. Beautiful.
Hind Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 8:29 PM
love this,
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