Childhood Beach Outing

Dug deep down inside
and pulled out the memory file
about being a child
with my family for
a rare outing at Jones Beach,
we were all there with
my Moms picnic basket,
just in case we got hungry,
we'd eat one of her special treats,
My Mom didn't like the water
and especially the ocean,
so she sat on her beach towel,
applying suntan lotion,
the rest of us going for
a swim for some cool relief,
my Dad diving in first
to show his swimming techniques,
from how to tread water
if we couldn't land on our feet,
to how to cup our hands,
and stroke with our arms
in a nice easy rhythm,
I could tell my Dad was on
a teaching how to swim mission,
then some of us took a leisurely
stroll on the beach shore,
while some of us ran when
we noticed horseshoe crabs
eerily congregating,
my Dad picked a couple of them
up by their tail,
and after inspecting them
threw them way up in the air,
where they'd land somewhere
in one of the waves,
landing precariously with
a very loud splash,
I thought to my 7 year old self,
with pride and love in my heart,
my Dad is so very brave,
when were on the beach
he is my hero because
he makes me feel so safe!

Addendum: My deceased Dad was a terrific swimmer who worked as a police officer on a police boat for the Marine Bureau on Long Island, N.Y. from 1955-1985…rest in peace Dad. We love and miss you...
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October 21, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Cheryl, You have written a deeply affecting poem. You relate family events with enthralling nostalgia, and your tribute to your Father is beautiful. You manage to do that with no exotic words, just with a straight-from-the-heart memoir. Lovely! hugs x x x
Hoffman Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Thanks so much Paul, you are very, very kind!:)
Emu Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Hey Cheryl, enjoyed the poem you wrote, lovely tribute to your dad. Beach memories are some of the best. Kindness sent, Craig
Hoffman Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 8:08 PM
I agree Craig; it was rare when we went so it was always a special time when we could. Thank you for the visit and nice comment btw! You are kind, kindness right back at ya:)
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:17 AM
what wonderful memories - you painted such a vivid picture with your imagery and it is a lovely tribute to your dad:-) hugs jan xx
Hoffman Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:46 AM
Thank you so much Jan for your visit and kind comment-hugs back to you Che xx
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