Childbirth On a Barren Planet

Emotionless, the doctor applied tools.
The foetus extracted,
they wheeled her away.
Although she could not move,
and could not relieve herself,
they did not check upon her
until the next day.

The Aerobus arrived
to take her to the
nursery planet,
where she would tend her offspring;
The matriarch checking
daily, weekly,
to see that she did so.

She did not rest.
She could not heal.
But there was no help for her,
fertility was more valuable every day;
and she had resigned her rights
when she had chosen
to join the gene pool.

Better than a row of test tubes,
were these living,
breathing incubators.
Once a gift to all humanity -
part of a lost cultural phenomenon
called ‘the family’;
Reproduction was now a rarity.

Originally published as "Childbirth on a Civilised Planet" 


Clarke, R. (Ed) The Mentor 85, January 1995, fanzine published by Ron Clarke, Sydney, Australia, [Archival copy available online at http://efanzines.com/Mentor/TM85COMP.pdf].

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Date: 2/11/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thank you for your comments. This poem has been criticised for being too personal and not enough metaphor. It was inspired by the set up at Gosford Hospital during the 1980s. After labour, the mums & bubs were taken by ambulance to a satellite hospital. Some people HATED being moved. I thought it rather nice to be surrounded by mums & bubs & no 'sick people'. The rest of the idea came from "The Handmaid's Tale" a futuristic book and film, in which fertile women were used as breeders.
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Date: 11/10/2017 11:19:00 AM
different but good read
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Date: 3/31/2017 5:03:00 PM
Nice ink
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