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Child of Mine

CHILD OF MINE I heard your first cries, Saw your tiny feet and big bright eyes. I held you in my arms, So tiny and frail. Kissing your forehead and Cherishing your smell. Before I knew it you Were on your feet, Pitter-patter, pitter-patter, A sound so sweet. School rolled around and You were ready to go. New clothes, new shoes And book bag in tow. When you were ten, You broke your first bone. Your leg in a cast, all Laid up at home. The teenage years flew by, Driving and your very first crush. Slow down sweetheart, The best parts you just can't rush. The time had come, College years were here. You made it your best But not without fear. Now you're grown, gone and on your own, Trying to find your way. When I think back on your young life, I always go back to your very first day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/17/2011 8:04:00 PM
A very nice story told in great wording and rhyming. I like this one.
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:17:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out our contests too...
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:01:00 AM
U have a gift, Christy! Your poem is flowing and captures soo much emotion. U bring it full circle magnificiently. I will save this one!
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