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Child Gone Wild

WHO trashed this whole house and went wild?
WHAT? You let in the dog? He got riled?
WHEN was this? Where’s he at?
WHERE the heck is the cat??
Just WHY ever did I want a child?

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Robin Davis

Date: 6/21/2014 5:50:00 PM

Andrea What a fun and silly write. Had me chuckling and picturing this act of destruction. Thank you for the great comment on my I Did It My Way poem.

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 11/23/2013 9:14:00 AM

HaaaHAHAHA! This is grrrreat! Clever, witty and fun to read. Enjoyed this very much! :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/19/2012 10:48:00 PM

This is soooooo cute Andrea ;}

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/5/2012 6:31:00 PM

Had me chuckling with this 5 W's. I can just imagine the damage a kid, a dog and a cat can create. Thanks for your comments my friend. love phyl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 10:43:00 AM

andrea, congrats;-) In Harry's fun fun... 5 w's contest. I think this was a fun contest.. Take care.. always~PD

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/1/2012 10:09:00 AM

Forgot to say earlier, replied to Soupmail! And I see this won, so congrats to you, sweetie! I am outta here! Hugs to you!

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/30/2012 3:37:00 PM

Wwwwwell; won with this one Andrea,; had lots of problems, so not getting much time to comment over the last few days..)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Harry's "5W's" contest Andrea. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol

Karen Croft

Date: 8/29/2012 5:51:00 PM

very funny poem reminds me of my 5 year old and our new kitten

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/29/2012 4:47:00 PM

Wow, a limerick! I love it, Andrea. Can't wait until my son is a teen...LOL...a belated congrats on a wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Gail Debole

Date: 8/28/2012 6:52:00 PM

Hi Andrea - Many kudos on your win! Very clever use of a limerick. Very funny! - Gail

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/28/2012 5:36:00 PM

this is a riot! congrats andrea, you wild child :-)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/28/2012 4:20:00 PM

Love the anticipated progression of words, Andrea...and I see u won this contest...g r e a t! I wrote on your fb wall...chk it out.

Dan Kearley

Date: 8/28/2012 9:42:00 AM

Ha,hahahahaha....Congrats on the win! Left me with a :o)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/28/2012 4:18:00 AM

LOL...this is awesome! Congrats on your win Andrea. Hugs

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/27/2012 3:07:00 PM

Oh boy, that's a hoot. Great poem. Good chuckle for today. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2012 9:13:00 AM

Cute questions that every mother has asked from time to time~!!! Great and clever theme, Andrea! Congrats!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/27/2012 8:15:00 AM

My warmest congratulations on your win my dear, Andrea! hugs, leonora

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2012 8:10:00 AM

So funny, Andrea! There were days when I asked myself why I wanted kids. I really enjoyed this. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 8/27/2012 8:01:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 8/27/2012 7:41:00 AM

Congrats friend Andrea..(^__^) I forgot to enter my poem on Harry's Contest..I just edit it...I'm forgetful...hahahahah. Thanks for your soupmail :) Have a nice day!!