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child on her deathbed black ants walking in the line gray leaves are falling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/12/2017 7:43:00 PM
So very sad, Rajat, the imagery is excellent ... Hugs dear friend
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Date: 11/10/2017 10:18:00 AM
What a dark sad atmosphere you have created in just three lines, Rajat! Very expressive. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/3/2017 9:27:00 AM
Wow! Based on fact? A sad moment. The order of things. The darkness of the moment...
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