Child

Cuddling up close to teddy, 
Happy smile on her face she sleeps
Is she remembering the circus with      
Lions and tigers prancing about, 
Dancing dogs, making her dream complete

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Andrea Dietrich

September 14, 2013 at 1:18 AM

I didn't see this one in my contest so I can comment to it. It's CUTE!!!! How are you doing, Seren?

Seren Roberts

September 14, 2013 at 2:03 AM

am ok thanks Andrea .....Seren

Cecilia Macfarlane

September 9, 2013 at 7:58 PM

There is no greater joy then watching a child dreaming happily,you captured that here is this sweet write of yours. Hugs

Seren Roberts

September 14, 2013 at 2:03 AM

Hi Cecilia how are you ...Seren

Lucilla Carrillo

September 5, 2013 at 8:00 PM

This is very nice. I like it. Is it for the contest? if it is - good luck... Lucilla

Seren Roberts

September 6, 2013 at 5:21 AM

No not for contest Just a write ...Seren

Mustapha Mohammed

September 4, 2013 at 4:36 PM

I sent you a Soup mail.

Barbara Gorelick

September 3, 2013 at 6:15 AM

Smiling! very cute. BG

Seren Roberts

September 3, 2013 at 9:18 AM

Thanks BG, wrote it for fun ...Seren

Russell Sivey

September 3, 2013 at 6:01 AM

This is quite the lovely sentimental write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a glorious piece, such a fabulous poem, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts

September 3, 2013 at 9:18 AM

Wrote it for fun Russell, glad you liked it...Seren