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Child-Like To Childish

Wide eyed wonders, passing crayons on the down low Blamelessness because they think nanny is too preoccupied to press charges on cookie theft And You'd Torture kids, with punches to their noses till you got the bloody knuckle Yet You've got A deceptive young mind You're meek-fullness guards these illegal violations Now you get temper tantrums when you don't get the dwink from your sippy-cup You start acting babyish because you couldn't nap nap with pwitty pwincess You said bad words and did bad things mommy wasn't watching But you got caught by nanny and she says, "timeout for life and spanky till death!" Mommy finished the fairy tale ,this is the end.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2016 8:40:00 PM

Jomarc Bernardo, awesome to see this one again. LindA~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2016 12:32:00 PM

- Thank you for your first poem, Jomarc :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:36:00 AM

Jomarc Bernardo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2016 9:48:00 PM

Jomarc, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@