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Feb.26.2024
"Welcome Spring Poetry Contest"
Re-entered for Constance Le Frances' No Placement Poetry Contest
~ Placed First~

 

"Nature is a joy in spring with fresh life and a wonder at other seasons. The myriad animate and inanimate forms living in nature surprise and delight us. The sight of little creatures taking care of their offspring raises our curiosity and heightens our admiration to the point of emulating them"~ By Poet
The silent snowy winter days are gone. Lively spring has come again. The cool wind brushes past my face Animals from their hide, come out in chain. A mother hen with her happy brood Of newly hatched chicks like balls of wool Is out of her coop for an outdoor hunt, To feed on termites under dry leaves, cool The chicks in self-abandon run and play. Some chase tiny bugs leaping from the grass. Some climb on their mother’s sloppy back. They enjoy the bright day’s cheer en masse. On the other side, bunnies leap and hop, In the hazy mist of the early morning light. They nibble at fresh grass in the meadow. Their sprightliness soaks my heart in delight. . My heartstrings are stretched out tight, As pigeons coo and robins sing, Adding a symphonic rhythm to the air, By the avian ensemble of spring I hear the whisper of fresh-grown leaves, Interrupted by the sweet strains of a meadowlark. On this lovely day, an urge to roam the countryside, Is ignited deep in my heart as a blazing spark.

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Date: 4/22/2024 6:44:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my contest with this delightful poem, love the image and quote too, Constance
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Date: 4/16/2024 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your write/cute picture. Have a blessed day writing away.........................
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Date: 3/1/2024 5:28:00 PM
Beautiful: ). So joyful, soothing, relaxing and refreshing to bring in this new spring to life in your wonderful gift of poetry : )
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Date: 2/28/2024 11:33:00 AM
This is so sweet and i love how your poem celebrates the arrival of spring with exuberance and reverence, reminding us of the wondrous cycle of nature and the promise of new beginnings that it brings with it... rhythmic flow and rhyming scheme contribute to its flow, echoing the harmonious symphony of nature awakening from its winter slumber. The longing expressed by the speaker to roam the countryside reflects the universal yearning to embrace the beauty and renewal that spring brings.
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Date: 2/28/2024 11:17:00 AM
a sweet picture of spring. It wouid be great fun to see the baby chicks in the yard!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/28/2024 11:18:00 AM
oh wow, it went through this time
Date: 2/27/2024 7:17:00 PM
Nature creates many things, including poems. Your inspiration from a rural scene has brought a beautiful bit of sunshine to the reader.
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Date: 2/27/2024 10:23:00 AM
"The cool wind brushes past my face Animals from their hide, come out in chain." -- Love the imagery. . "My heartstrings are stretched out tight, As pigeons coo and robins sing, Adding a symphonic rhythm to the air, By the avian ensemble of spring" beautiful poetry.
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Date: 2/26/2024 4:56:00 PM
a delightful and creative poem. I enjoyed reading of the avian's adventure as they enjoyed the springtime. Your imagery was colorful (like spring) and there was a certain melodic ring to your words. I identify with these lines: On this lovely day, an urge to roam the countryside, Is ignited deep in my heart as a blazing spark. Fantastic contest entry. Best wishes, hugs, Sara
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Date: 2/26/2024 12:43:00 PM
Dear Valsa, your boundless creativity and masterful skill in crafting vivid imagery are truly remarkable! Your language manipulation is effortlessly melodic, and your storytelling prowess is extraordinary. You've perfectly grasped the theme, making it appear easy with your smooth and engaging poetry. Your mention of the arrival of spring at the beginning sets the stage for a captivating rhythmic journey through the rest of the piece.
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:15:00 AM
Wow, what a spring outing for chicks, bunnies and more of their friends. I lived in an urban setting called Meadowlark. History had it, they were plenty, when it was a farm. Now in urban seating, they all have disappeared.
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Date: 2/26/2024 9:31:00 AM
Ah sweet valsa, your way with words here truly has a beautiful cadence to it, and is so very well woven, with great storytelling, youv made this theme sound so easy , with your seamless flow of lines, i especially love how youv started it by mentioning, its spring now again, and then how youve made the rest just go in a very engaging rhythm, “ As pigeons coo and robins sing, Adding a symphonic rhythm to the air, ” soulful! Made me see through your words and feel so much! Uplifting poem it is.FAV
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Date: 2/26/2024 7:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 2/26/2024 5:24:00 AM
beautifully written, enjoyed the rhymes, and subtle images, thanks poet
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Date: 2/26/2024 5:24:00 AM
beautifully written, enjoyed the rhymes, and subtle images, thanks poet
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