Chicken Little's Sad Demise - Fable

(7/5 Trochee Poem)

Chicken  Little, thinking that
sky was soon to fall,
saw a mortuary and
crawled beneath a pall.

He was in a strange dark box
where a dead man lay.
Then before he knew it, they
hauled that box away!

He was moved, but that poor bird
couldn’t get a look,
for they’d closed the wooden lid,
Chicken Little shook.

When the casket got dropped down
in the ground so deep,
Chicken Little, very scared,
still made not one peep!

He was sure the sky fell down
when he heard the dirt
being shoveled over him.
This was gonna hurt!

Nothing happened, but he could
barely take in air.
Am I dying? Little thought:
Is the sky still there?

No more would the animals
hear poor “Little’s” call
warning them of tragedy
if the sky should fall.

Chicken Little never guessed
he was murdered by
that same earth he‘d walked upon, 
and not by the sky!

Moral: Fear can sometimes lead you into something far worse than you ever imagined, so be careful not to fear things too greatly!

An oldie for Joseph May's Fabled Musings Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Daniel Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 9:12 AM
This is such a lovely fable, Andrea with an excellent moral:) a 7:) congratulations on your well deserved win:)
Burch Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 9:19 PM
Congratulations Andy!! :) well done sweetie!! Big Hugggs and love. deb
Allison Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Great to read this again Andrea - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Here you are again in a most familiar place. Great going and congratulations for your win....
Krampe Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 10:01 PM
Congrats on your top win with this fun fable, Andrea.
Y. Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Hi Andrea, Great fable with a good moral. Congratulations on your first place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 9:06 PM
Wonderful fable, Andrea, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve
Wigley Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 12:44 AM
Terrific write, Andrea, a worthy topster. Congratulations! By the way, did you know that the guy who invented the USB stick died last week? They lowered his coffin into the ground, then had to lift it out and put it back in the right way round..... Viv x
Y. Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Hi Andrea, I agree the others, this was so original. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Chansarkar Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 2:49 PM
A great moral for all,congrats Andrea!
Smith Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:20 AM
A chicken in a coffin? What a delightful children's fable indeed... Congratulations Andrea.
Arnone Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 10:58 AM
You killed Chicken Little, Andrea! Dig him up and make me some Italian chicken cutlets. Congrats # 1. :-)
Rv Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 6:59 AM
Oooh! How sad! I looovvveeedddd this poem! Congrats on your win!
Oule Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 4:16 AM
Congs andrea, you're winner with this poem Love Bryan.. xoxox
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 1:23 AM
I love this Story Andrea and congrats on your worthy win...huggs
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:04 AM
Humorous but sad..it speaks volumes...something deep. Happy on your win. Love---rajat
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Such an amusing write Andrea - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
A   Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 6:55 PM
ANDREA, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
A   Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol.... now i know what to read to my kids tomorrow night... LOL... pd
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 10:47 PM
Poor chicken little. You know now how I love poems about animals. My favorite animal to write about is the chicken. So of course I loved this poem.
Poet Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 6:10 AM
Really a sad demise!---kashinath
Fraser Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 4:14 PM
Delightful amusing piece Andrea >> James
K. Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 1:33 AM
oh youchy!! Irony to the nth power with your write here, Andrea! Better not let the kids know of this version though ;) but I enjoyed this poem of yours, of course :) best of luck in the contest :) btw will check out your blog after this :)
Ryerson Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 7:27 PM
7/5 Trochee...Wow! - Sad yet beautiful at the same time, Andrea...You are on a roll!! ...keep um' coming, my friend! - Tim
Owens Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 8:44 PM
Very funny and very sad...enjoyed...Good luck in the contest...Marty
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