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Ch'I-Yen-Shih Metre - I Am Brave

i chase the sun, on bare feet. one thought i have, the sun stays. no cloud to hide, my dim route, for death, it hides, feel it's gaze! one day I walk, smooth ground run. mind rocks and sand, the track hides eyes seek out cracks, could mean some food, tum needs grub, each step bides i have cool drinks, streams quench thirst. a time to rest, i must think a cold front seen, yet well far, i hear it roar, cloud still pink the storm now close, a cave seen dark clouds a flash, in the cave safe sleep it calls, next day waits it comes no sun, i am brave!

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Date: 5/30/2018 6:05:00 PM
I'm not familiar with the form but I like the resulting poem.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/31/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Richard, single syllble words the challenge. Mick

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