Poetprentice Dupins Poet Monorhyme

Chesapeake Bay

One day I’ll play in the Chesapeake Bay
On a boat I’ll lay soaking up sun rays
Sunscreen I’ll spray U.V. rays turn away
Catch a fish I’ll pray possibly display
A fish mouth I’ll splay possibly filet
A good day I’ll say in Chesapeake Bay

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Janis Medders Tobechi May 13, 2017 at 10:28 AM I am from MD and have had many experiences on the Bay, seasickness mostly from small boats. There is a lot of beauty to talk about.

John Hamilton April 30, 2017 at 2:47 PM Hey PPD nice rhymes, however you are very capable of a more difficult rhyme, avoid repetition of sounds eg lay 5x repeating words bay2x and you will place higher, loved the flow was a perfect 10! Thanks again!

Chris Green April 27, 2017 at 5:13 PM Nicely done. I have been to the Chesapeake Bay a few times and driven across on the CB Bridge. Now that is an experience.