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Chesapeake Bay

One day I’ll play in the Chesapeake Bay On a boat I’ll lay soaking up sun rays Sunscreen I’ll spray U.V. rays turn away Catch a fish I’ll pray possibly display A fish mouth I’ll splay possibly filet A good day I’ll say in Chesapeake Bay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 5/13/2017 10:28:00 AM
I am from MD and have had many experiences on the Bay, seasickness mostly from small boats. There is a lot of beauty to talk about.
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Date: 4/30/2017 2:47:00 PM
Hey PPD nice rhymes, however you are very capable of a more difficult rhyme, avoid repetition of sounds eg lay 5x repeating words bay2x and you will place higher, loved the flow was a perfect 10! Thanks again!
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Date: 4/27/2017 5:13:00 PM
Nicely done. I have been to the Chesapeake Bay a few times and driven across on the CB Bridge. Now that is an experience.
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