Cherubim Whim

~winged Cherubim of love’s whims
       shoot thy whimsical arrow
          seal very heart of my fate
             choose for me my mate~ 

For and in Honor of Dr Ram
And Contest: Winged Cupid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 22, 2011 at 6:27 AM
Congrats john on your well deserved win in the contest---kashinath
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations to you Moses for your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Winged Cupid". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:43 AM
Excellent, John. Many congrat's on your win, Elaine
Muzzey Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:26 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win. Caryl
Neels Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 6:40 AM
A real beauty John, congratulations to you on your win in Dr. Ram's contest :) blessings W
Mannan Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 10:10 PM
So beautiful John. Many many congrats on this wonderful win.
Horne Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Congrats on your win, John : ) Jack
Sweetheart Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:26 PM
Congrats Moses on your wonderful success in the Cupid contest my friend.. delightful words ..enjoy your win with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:24 PM
This was very nice, john, and I am glad to see you on the winners' list. Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:20 PM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, John. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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March 20, 2011 at 3:07 PM
Congrats John on your success in the contest....
Mehta Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Cngratulations on the ninth place win in my contest, john
Maverick Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 2:20 PM
Very accepting feel to the fates in this write John, much enjoyed!
Horne Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Thanks, John - and many congratulations to you : ) Jack
Brown Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 11:21 AM
I am stopping by today to say a special Thank You for your kind comments Moses. Have a wonderful day. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 9:58 AM
Cupid does seem to have a "whimsical arrow," John. Otherwise, why would he create so many mismatches. He toys with us. LOL Enjoyed your entry and hope to see your poem in the winners' circle! Looks like we're all having fun with this contest. Dr. Ram chose a great theme! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 6:38 AM
Yours is excellent, john. I took this critter a totally opposite way. haha. Thanks for your sympathetic comment! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 5:14 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest, john
Gorelick Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 7:58 PM
Very nice..the second line is terrific. BG
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