Cherry Red

CHERRY RED

think a berry pie
poor fruit fallen
from a tree
foot sole cherry red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ferguson Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 9:20 AM
I see you write a lot of the haiku , very pretty
Maverick Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 5:25 PM
Thoughts on a' berry nice' plane, under a tree? not a plain write by my estimation Daver, love the colour effect..'
Fraser Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Love it Daver, James....
Collins Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 8:04 AM
Foot sole cherry red - Only you Daver! love, Kathy
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 1:09 AM
hey, Daver, thanks for visiting my poem today. See ya later, alligator.
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:39 PM
the last line is the clincher. Poor fruit and poor foot!!! I sure like this kind of poetry from you, my friend.
Gorelick Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 12:36 PM
This made me smile..glad to see your haiku. BG
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