Chelated Soul's De-Lamentation

Chelated Souls’ De-lamentation 

Lovers dejected
lick wounds remonstrate lonely
sorrow ‘til they meet
mate seduce in sex love rock
roll in minds soul mingled hay


26th September 2016
Contest Lament A Tanka
Syllable 5 7 5 7 7 =31
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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September 26, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Yep, a good Love-rock can do wonders for the psyche. Excellent writing!
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