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inside of these walls cheetahs stay permanently~ we ceased to be prey 3Rd place contest winner written: April 11, 2022 Wild Animal Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin checked by: howmanysyllabls.com

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Date: 4/21/2022 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations dear Lasaad on your sweet win !
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Date: 4/20/2022 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write in just three lines. The picture looks peaceful. Nap time. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 4/19/2022 2:44:00 PM
so interesting "we ceased to be prey" sounds like someone became their friends. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/18/2022 8:50:00 PM
Terrible cat, yet. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/18/2022 12:47:00 PM
Well, it is good we are no longer their prey. They are an interesting animal but very scary out in the wild. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/18/2022 8:40:00 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!
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Date: 4/18/2022 10:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tania. Appreciate your reading placing and commenting on my Haiku. It means a lot to me.
Date: 4/17/2022 9:51:00 PM
An excellent haiku, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/17/2022 8:58:00 AM
True... and somewhat sad, in some way. Well done. Emotions were felt. Ann
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Date: 4/12/2022 6:13:00 PM
Aww!
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Date: 4/12/2022 2:21:00 PM
last line is so well done!
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Date: 4/12/2022 8:16:00 AM
Graceful animals that still will see us as pray if they have nothing better to do. A fine Haiku, my friend, Lasaad!
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Date: 4/12/2022 6:31:00 AM
Beautiful creatures that should roam free…..in the country! Enjoyed this Lasaad . Debx
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Date: 4/12/2022 5:14:00 AM
Life in captivity--well described, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/12/2022 3:45:00 AM
Cheetahs inside the fence cannot reach us. So we never fall a prey to them.... ! Good one Lasaad !
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Date: 4/11/2022 11:49:00 PM
Beautiful creatures Lasaad, best seen close up behind a fence, hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Date: 4/11/2022 10:54:00 PM
Great ending. Best for a win.
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