Cheese Tease

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This is taken from my poem 'All You Need is Cheese'

The humble cheese has a secret superpower Its gooey glory conquers cauliflower Melting with glee for fried baloney The better half of macaroni 8/20/21

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/17/2021 5:50:00 PM

Hello Michelle ... what you can't do with cheese ain't worth doing - thank you Michelle - Lindsay

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/16/2021 5:31:00 AM

…that last line, giggles galore! <3

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 8/24/2021 9:43:00 PM

Yum-a-roni! Your poem is powerful enough to give me a craving for mac and cheese!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/23/2021 8:18:00 PM

Take out line 3, and we'll open up a kosher cheese-bar together, Michelle. lol. Nice 4-lilner. ~ Gershon

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/21/2021 11:19:00 AM

And the captcha code is HAM . . . ..

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/21/2021 4:44:00 PM

Ham and cheese were meant to be!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/20/2021 7:33:00 PM

Wow, I got hungry, Michelle, lol. I echo what rose said. It should come with a warning; people should avoid reading while they are hungry. Thanks for your precious visit to my page.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/21/2021 4:45:00 PM

Cheese can make almost anything better! Thanks for commenting~

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/20/2021 2:49:00 PM

You got me drooling you had me at fried baloney, lol, nice one, it should come with a warning, do not read on an empty stomach :_

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/21/2021 4:44:00 PM

I should add that, thanks my friend!