Cheese Monster

I remember 
dancing for joy 
Sitting on an open shelf 
This beautiful maiden 
Strolls into the shop 
As my eyes whistled 
She picked me up 

Holding me in her hands 
Smiling down at me 
Excited 

Oh I love 
Words had trembling effect 
with this cheese 

Taking me home 
You took a little bite 
A little taste
Nibbling 
Out of me 
Lips softly grin
bursts in flavour 
Almost cheesy 
Licking delicious 

Opening a door 
You placed me 
on top shelf 
Felt like royalty 
Lights out wow 

The last face 
I remembered 
Ever so beautiful 
Weeks pass 
Feeling almost 
out of date 
Left in the dark 

A smell started 
Pungent in fungus hair 
Taking over 
almost septic 
Crawling green 
in mildew 

Beautiful maiden 
Awaiting you in dreams 
You open the door 
Squealing out 
Monsters 
frightened in the fridge 

All I done 
was shout cheese 
Smile darling 
I am 
all yours 
Sweet love 

Thrown in a black plastic bag 
Broken hearted suffocating 
with the rubbish 

Shouting walking away 
That's me done 
With cheese 

It was so sad 
The green hairy 
old monster 
Began crying 
Now smile 
for cheese 

As you will not like 
To see the ugly side 
Of the green 
hairy old 
Cheese monster

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/8/2013 7:35:00 PM
A very unique, fun and crazy story that made me smile!...I actually love cheese! I am from Wisconsin, in the United States, and we are a state that is famous for our cheese. So I don't have a choice but to love the stuff!...A very creative and enjoyable piece of cheese poetry!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/9/2013 4:16:00 PM
ha ha i got a smile beautiful thank you deeply
Date: 8/29/2013 2:57:00 AM
Hi Liam, Good to see you over here buddy..I liked this one from you.. Regards, Ken
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/29/2013 7:45:00 AM
THANK YOU KEN GREAT TO SEE YOU TO PAL THANKS FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 8/28/2013 7:30:00 PM
You're at Poetry Soup and you didn't even tell me Liam. So now you're a cheese monster...lol.Enjoyed this one buddy....M.M
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/29/2013 7:47:00 AM
WELL LOOK WHO IT IS PETER PAN HA HA GREAT TO SEE YOU PAL KEEP US ON THE RIGHT PATH I AM HEADING OF TO THE BALL TO GO MAD AS A HATTER TALK LATER PAL HAVE A BLESSED BEAUTIFUL DAY
Date: 8/28/2013 5:39:00 PM
Very funny and somewhat tragic. I can relate because at some stage we all fear going past our used by date. Who will love us then?
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/31/2013 3:58:00 AM
THANK YOU KINDLY FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 8/28/2013 4:34:00 PM
Are you eating cheese ? : ) I love cheese but this kind of sound like a cheesy cheap blue cheese indigestion fungal pain experience.Sounds like a heart in pain using its last beat to bleed.Sad but excellent post
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/28/2013 5:00:00 PM
i thought this one would get you stuck for words i bet i got a smile so the cheese worked thank you for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated
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