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A glass of red wine spilt on cream carpet, I'm upbeat salt will remove the stain!

The glass is always full contest
Sponsored by Alexis Y 

June 15th 2017

drinkhomemonoku

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Gregory Richard Barden

October 10, 2017 at 12:45 AM

White wine and RED carpet for me, lol - blessings and congratulations on your win, my friend! :-)

Jan Allison

October 10, 2017 at 7:00 AM

No wine its a cuppa tea for me lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

October 9, 2017 at 8:02 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison

October 10, 2017 at 7:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

October 9, 2017 at 4:08 PM

Love this one, Jan! Well said...we have white carpeting and drink red wine...been there done that! Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

October 9, 2017 at 4:11 PM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

October 9, 2017 at 2:25 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win !

Jan Allison

October 9, 2017 at 2:37 PM

Thanks Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

October 9, 2017 at 7:49 AM

Congrats, Jan!

Jan Allison

October 9, 2017 at 1:17 PM

Thanks Dale:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

October 9, 2017 at 7:33 AM

Hi Jan, I enjoyed your well written one-liner. The next time a spill some red wine, I will keep that in mind. Congratulations on your 1st place win. I appreciate that you participated in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

October 9, 2017 at 1:17 PM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Alfred Berggren

June 22, 2017 at 2:00 PM

I keep this idea and use if I have a problem. Thanks for the lines.

Jan Allison

June 22, 2017 at 2:25 PM

It's a useful tip... but its better to keep the wine in the glass Alfred!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett

June 18, 2017 at 7:07 AM

Brilliant Monoku Jan, no point in crying over split wine, we must stay positive, :))

Jan Allison

June 18, 2017 at 9:14 AM

Definitely Roy:-) hugs Jan xx

Pintu Chandra Deb

June 17, 2017 at 11:30 AM

Gold and Green written.

Jan Allison

June 17, 2017 at 12:02 PM

Thanks for the comment:-) hugs jan xx

Funom Makama

June 17, 2017 at 9:23 AM

Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.

Jan Allison

June 17, 2017 at 10:02 AM

Thanks Funom its lovely to see you back:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior

June 17, 2017 at 8:39 AM

Now, why would you want to do that?...salt can be very expensive nowadays lol...must have been a hell of a party Jan lol...all the best...^WW^

Jan Allison

June 17, 2017 at 10:01 AM

LOL ^WW^ salt is a lot cheaper than a bottle of wine lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith

June 15, 2017 at 10:02 PM

Leave it, put up crime scene tape, see how far the story goes...

Jan Allison

June 15, 2017 at 10:10 PM

lol yes and find out whodunnit at a later date lol - great comment Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

June 15, 2017 at 5:52 PM

For blood you have to use muriatic acid. Lol Bully for you if it does:) Jan the party girl. Lol

Jan Allison

June 15, 2017 at 6:07 PM

I'm not sure I like the idea of parties where blood is spilled!!!! and I'm definitely more a cup of tea girl these days!:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

June 15, 2017 at 5:17 PM

Good one Jan! :) Cheers. Good luck in the contest !

Jan Allison

June 15, 2017 at 5:21 PM

Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

June 15, 2017 at 4:33 PM

If I didn't know that you don't drink, I'd wonder how many you had to make you spill. wink.

Jan Allison

June 15, 2017 at 4:53 PM

lol Lin. The last glass of red wine I has was 1/2 glass on my birthday in January! I drink alcohol so rarely these days:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe

June 15, 2017 at 2:36 PM

Trust you to put a humorous spin on this prompt. love it, Jan!

Jan Allison

June 15, 2017 at 3:04 PM

I wrote several lines Agnes but none of them seemed suitable then I thought of this one which sort of fits the contest theme with the ending being positive after the disaster:-) hugs jan xx