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Cheerios To Go

Constipation as we all too well know

Disrupts everybody’s natural flow

     I welcome the Cheerios

     When the tummy bulging grows

Shout out to the toilet, “Look out below!”



*For Poet Destroyer’s Favorite Cereal Contest
by Carolyn Devonshire

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2011 10:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Favorite Cereal" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/9/2011 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2011 1:31:00 AM

YOurs was one of the best, Carolyn. Congrats on your win!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/6/2011 3:27:00 PM

Haha! That last line is a hoot! Enjoyed this one, Carolyn! I hope all is well with you-- wish you the best in pd's contest and hugs :)

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/2/2011 1:55:00 PM

talk about a riot! this is hilarious! such a great ending - disgusting, but awesome! wish i had thought of it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2011 1:34:00 PM

hahaha, this is a good an' funny one. Cheerios are not bad. I remember my stepdad just adored them!

James Fraser

Date: 10/2/2011 9:38:00 AM

This poetry will so get a chuckle. My poem is on a similar theme. Good luck in the contest Carolyn :)

Jack Horne

Date: 10/1/2011 3:12:00 PM

LOL, PD will love this one for sure : D

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/1/2011 1:34:00 PM

This one seriously will make the list Carolyn.. You wicked woman, you ;) lol enjoyed this, love Wilma

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/1/2011 1:28:00 PM

HA HA this put a smile on my face especially since I am having stomach problems today. Think I need more cheerios or something. Thanks for you wishes. love phyl

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 10/1/2011 8:37:00 AM

"To go ...or not to go...that is the question" :) I shall never look atr cheerios the same again!

Tony Lane

Date: 9/30/2011 3:53:00 PM

The Cheerios factory was right next to the football practice field. When I was in the 4th grade and not yet sure what football was all about, the closer I got to the field the more I could smell the Cheerios and the more nervous I would get. Now whenever I smell Cheerios I feel nervous until I figure out why. Ahh Pavlov

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2011 3:43:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..I hope written just for fun not from life experience..Got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I haven't written for a contest in a few days for I haven't been in the "mood"..Sara