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My Grandmère

 

I'm in line at a store, and I'm bored, Typing on my phone, restless and alone. I’ve got light-blue nails, like the sky or your eyes. I like them, it’s my favorite color - I don’t know why. I’m buying flavors for my coffee, nutmeg and pumpkin spice. I like having coffee in the morning, when it’s cold, they’ll taste nice. There’s a really old lady at the check-out, she’s moving very slowly. She’s paying with cash and coin, from a pouch, counting carefully, holey-moley. She’s frail and reminds me of my Grandmère, with her white hair, her sturdy shoes, I want to pick her up and hug her - but laissez-faire. When my turn came, I waved my Apple watch over the pay terminal - it’s fast and contactless - like the whole world. Does anyone hug old ladies anymore?

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Date: 11/8/2023 5:18:00 AM
Old men still hug old ladies, and they like to hug the young ones too... ;)
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Anais Vionet
Date: 11/8/2023 5:56:00 AM
Hugs are good for the soul =]
Date: 11/6/2023 7:42:00 PM
tactful, touching, introspective,
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