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Written for " the End  "contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

but to seize the gold of your splintered sun, must I m o v e dreams across tables of trickery placed with forks of forgery and chalices of deceit c r a d l i n g the dust of life and ticking truth s l i t h e r i n g in silk among writhing serpents awaiting the stroke of midnight thorns? and to confuse my patience with a pawn is a miscalculated mistake for I refuse to be chained in citrines~ engrossed in cruelty served in sinister spoons; threats from an egomaniac soaked in m u s k s of dusk so tonight, I bid adieu to the eccentric accent of a ruthless strategist; the end tastes sweeter than sips of silence~ your speech mocking the stem of an aching rose, illustrating p e t a l s glazed by the moon~ as maleficence in the narcissistic narratives there is no line of empathy in my arcade of angst~ for the fallen star armored with daggers protecting the cave of chaos.

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Date: 1/31/2025 12:25:00 PM
Dearest Inky, I was sure I had commented on your brilliant take for the contest! What a wonderful image "checkmate" is. Perfect! So happy to see this on the winners list! Congratulations, dear friend! Sending you blessings of joy! Samzy~
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Date: 1/21/2025 12:52:00 PM
IE, I'm reading this description and am struck by the scenario coming to life. I would normally view a board game as a game of mathematical possibilities, but I won't look at it that way next time after reading this. The patience you have in fulfilling your desired outcome creates an allegorical lesson for many. We do need to be able to see through to the end what we wish to do. You're making me think of a chess game against all different kinds of foes in different situations. I know I have an obsession with a certain subject, but "an egomaniac, soaked in musks of dusk" and "maleficence in the narcissistic narratives" reminds me of a recently inaugurated USA political figure. Smiles!
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Date: 1/18/2025 10:11:00 PM
Interesting metaphor of a chess game, where you bid adieu to a ruthless strategist!
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Date: 1/16/2025 7:04:00 PM
Very deep, Ink - could feel you're a warrior to some people :) <3
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Date: 1/16/2025 9:00:00 AM
Dear Inky, you have a gifted pen and I obviously favored this write (funny, because I wondered if someone would take the checkmate path). To follow up on your comment to Dilly - yes, I'm not a fan of modifiers that embellish, nor naked writing - just enough clothing to entice & seduce the imagination...
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Date: 1/16/2025 9:41:00 AM
Ah thank you dear craigsz, your comments are as poetic and deep, how you explained here what you like. It was a last minute poem but im so grateful for the placement and so glad that you liked it. Thank you so very much!! Truly.
Date: 1/16/2025 8:39:00 AM
WELL done, and you got a great win, Ink. The title is so cool. congrats on the win. I nearly made it into the top ten. Better than nothing I guess!!
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Date: 1/16/2025 9:39:00 AM
Oh, yes it definitely means alot and congratulations on your placement too. Hope you are well. Will email you soon
Date: 1/15/2025 5:40:00 PM
Wow! Someone is definitely out of your favor. As usual, brilliant imagery. Great poetry.
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Date: 1/16/2025 6:30:00 AM
Haha yes was in a mood dear joe thank you so much for the comment
Date: 1/15/2025 10:32:00 AM
Touche` my precious Ink Empress, nothing less than the queen of your chess board and never a lowly pawn. Not one petal shall wither, always undaunted never obsequious, the 'Rose' protected by her thorns. "And to confuse my patience with a pawn is a miscalculated mistake" an error indeed! Beautiful poetry, poetess <3 I'm not really back, just happy to be here and there :)
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Date: 1/16/2025 6:30:00 AM
Hah awwn sweet anaya, i was in a mood when i wrote this, narcissists, are such delusional beings hungry for control: sending you light today and always! Hope the fires are ok now there and i hope to see you back again soon
Date: 1/15/2025 5:02:00 AM
Dear Empress, Happy New Year and sorry I have not been around. I went on vacation for two weeks and from day one had to deal with the worst lingering cold. I am back and I say, breathtakingly fierce and masterful! The imagery of "midnight thorns," "sinister spoons," and "the cave of chaos" is so evocative. It’s like stepping into a dark, poetic epic. A new year FAV! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 1/16/2025 6:29:00 AM
Ah hope you are feeling mucu better; the year did start on a similar note for many i know so i can imagine! Sending you light always
Date: 1/15/2025 4:09:00 AM
My black knight is coming to take your white queen and crown. What trickery can I use to get through your barrier. Is stealth the way, or just simple charm.
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Date: 1/16/2025 6:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, you must be a good chess player. Always grateful for your kind support
Date: 1/14/2025 9:17:00 PM
Brilliant writing IE, you are the Queen of metaphors. Good luck luck in the contest, hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 1/16/2025 6:02:00 AM
Awwn thats such a thoughtful wnd kind thing to say dear tom; thank you so very much for your kindness truly
Date: 1/14/2025 6:05:00 AM
“arcade of angst” ~ how do you come up with these and of course “tables of trickery”. Enjoyed the read immensely, IE, thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/14/2025 7:49:00 AM
That means alot coming from you dear seeker, thank you so very much for your kind support and visit, grateful always
Date: 1/14/2025 5:28:00 AM
Wow!!! Such a powerful and emotional poem. I love your artistry. Enjoyed reading and feeling this!!!
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Date: 1/14/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much so glad that you enjoyed reading this dear robert, sending you light always
Date: 1/14/2025 5:22:00 AM
- Powerful with scorn and malice... "soaked in musks of dusk" ... checkmate you are exposed - Best wishes in the contest, Ink :) - hugs
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Date: 1/14/2025 7:42:00 AM
Haha thank you so very much dear anne lise grateful for your support and well wishes
Date: 1/14/2025 3:17:00 AM
Woah! This creates a mood and ambiance I haven't seen before. Such biting lines that have a jagged edge that will take no nonsense. Excellent concept and execution (lol) for the contest - powerful!
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Date: 1/14/2025 7:39:00 AM
Yeap sometimes when i remove the vague metaphors and colors in my poems you see the rawness of what i express in other poems, craig doesnt normally like what i usually do so its a bit raw hah . Inspired by the prompt, love your comment! " execution" lol thank you so much
Date: 1/14/2025 2:12:00 AM
must I move dreams across tables of trickery, Mmmmm u must not!!! Y must u aeee??? Y ??? cradling the dust of life and ticking truth, Mmmmm … confuse my patience with a pawn is a miscalculated mistake, yaaaaas exactly!!! U tell em !!! Big buiiiig mistake … I bid adieu to the eccentric accent of a ruthless strategist; mmmmmm I love the strength seeping through this piece!!! end tastes sweeter than sips of silence Ooo that line is freaking brilliant!! Ooo n that ending for the fallen star armored with daggers, protecting the cave of chaos. Absolute perfection papiiii!!! * dramatic clapppsss!!!!! *
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Date: 1/14/2025 7:38:00 AM
Lol drama thank you papi
Date: 1/14/2025 12:43:00 AM
Tables of trickery ! Deep . Loving it
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Date: 1/14/2025 1:19:00 AM
Awwn thank you dahlin

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