Checking Out

Words from perforated ceiling tiles squawk
as megaphone filters blare
in crackled sequence
around missing stations
and call letters that aren’t acronyms

I hear these words, but shake my head
I know they are for me,
sent by well wishing advisors
wearing t-shirts imprinted
“I’m with stupid”

(and the arrows point at me)

Still I don’t heed the warnings… 
I can’t, for dreams require reaching,
top shelf visions waving with 
hope filled coupons
offering no discount for the heart

“Don’t want what you can not have,” they shout
As I continue to climb the frozen escalator,
cleaning my shoes on the bristles,
then checking my appearance in the sunglass
refection of a mannequin missing one arm 

(and I feel happy for this plastic person)

For it has no idea how it feels
To be out of style, yesterday’s sleeves
worn of worried first impressions, 
heart beat delusions and needs
at the end of the line…to check out

and yet, until the time comes for me to “check out” 
I will reach for that dream, regardless of 
invisible sales clerks on their eternal break,
because I will reach that register and I will ask that question
to which she just might say yes

(and then who will be wearing the t-shirt)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 9:35 AM
You penned a very creative poem, Chris. Melding the abstract w/wry humor is a rare combo, albeit a winning one. You are a romantic thinking man. You pose the difficult questions, such as: is this how love's suppose to be? Then I'm checking out, cause it's not for me. Great write, my friend. Love always. RW
Green Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 9:05 AM
That's it exactly my friend. Thanks so much for your visits and encouraging comments
Smith Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:57 PM
I like your imagery Chris...hope you don't check out for awhile.
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November 11, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Thanks so much Tim. It's a pretty long line so it won't be real soon. :)
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November 11, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Very Creative . I like the line about reaching for that dream. :)
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November 11, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Thank you again my friend. That was probably the only good line in the poem. :)
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