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Cheating Roses

cut the crap you fake bringing home roses and cakes ~ cheating pig was staked A Valentine's Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 04/02/21 Syllable counter PS 5/7/5

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/11/2021 8:30:00 PM

This is so good,David , congratulations on your win. Eve

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/12/2021 1:17:00 AM

Thanks Eve, the seedy side, of love, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2021 5:08:00 PM

yeah, that sure tells it right!! Congrats on your win,

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/12/2021 1:15:00 AM

A little dark Andrea, for Valentine’s Day, but such is life, cheers David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2021 1:07:00 PM

It is strange how some men try to cover up their cheating with flowers or candy. Congrats on this winner. Sara

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/11/2021 1:13:00 PM

It certainly is Sara, I wonder if it is a cover for some, or just to look good in front of the children, I’m sure it’s not done with the wife or partners best interests at heart, cheers David

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/10/2021 2:07:00 PM

David, congratulations on your winning placement with your dark and creative poem!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/10/2021 2:25:00 PM

Thank you so much Tania, enjoyed releasing a bit of steam and dark truth into your contest, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2021 11:05:00 AM

- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, David - // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/10/2021 12:15:00 PM

Heya Anne-Lise, thank you so much for looking in with congrats, always delighted to get in the mix, cheers David

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/10/2021 6:34:00 AM

I like this David. A nice break from all the gooey sweetness. Congratulations on the win! Linda

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/10/2021 8:44:00 AM

Cheers Linda, was inspired by a close family member being cheated on, by a box of chocolates and champagne man, the cheating is bad enough, it’s the cheap hypocrisy that really gets to me, I was wondering how many others are doing the same this Valentine’s Day thank you so much for looking in cheers David

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/4/2021 6:01:00 PM

Say it! Hey, you did!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 11:55:00 PM

The contest got me thinking Caren, just how many, bring home roses and gifts on Valentine’s Day, but with a big cheating smile on their face, Tania encouraged or was happy to have some dark senryus in the contest cheers David